| "The mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam (not logged in) On: October 02, 2003 08:38 CDT
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*gasp* O.O *sitting there for hours in stunned silence* Hang on... you'resugesstingthatJoeymayormay'not'havemurderedanybodyespeciallyifhedidn' trememberkillingthemunlesshishadadrinkbutIseriouslydobutthat..EEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKK @_________@ Yami: *looks at her* Don't mind her she's just fainted from a sugar rush but she informs us to tell you to keep this going and who that mysterious person is and if you're going to kill someone else like a ditzy klutzy friendship preaching dancer we all know and loathe...Hell's demon of driving insanity to all the pure folk of our humble kind... ^________^ *wakes up* Good analogy *faints again* @_________@
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Reviewed By: Madyamisam (not logged) On: October 02, 2003 08:31 CDT
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*gasps* O.O *after sitting there for the whole day in stunned silence* Oh hang on... soyou'resuggestingthatJoeymayormay'not'haveshothis fatherforrthefactthathedidn'trememberplusthefactsomeone'safterhim...EEEEKKK KK!!!!! @_____@ Yami: *looking down at fainted Sam* Don't mind her she's just fainted from the sugar rush... She want's to know who this mystery person is and also if there will be someone else that dies like for example a ditzy klutzy friendship preaching dancer we all know and loathe... *wakes up* ^___________^ Well said koi *faints again* @___________@ Yami: ^______________________________________^ V
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Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 17:00 CDT
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EEEEEEEEIIIIIIIII!!!!! WHO DID HE KILL1!?!?!? WHO DID HE KILL!?!?!?!?! COME ON I GOTTA KNOW PPPPPPPPPPPPWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! Ok shutting up now... Does that mean episode 158 means the end of the Yu-Gi-Oh series? T__________T
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Reviewed By: jean On: July 27, 2003 01:16 CDT
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i have one thing to say
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: millenniumyugioh On: July 20, 2003 23:57 CDT
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It's really exciting. Who Joey killed, and what's going to happen. I suggest that you definately continue this story! |
Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 11:19 CDT
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Im glad you guys are liking it. 5 more and i'll post up the rest!! I started on the 1st chappie for this storie sooooo i'll post it in a while
Emily ^_^ |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 21:52 CDT
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Interesting... you left quite a cliffie... Who died? Why'd Joey kill them? Was it Tea? PLEEEEASE SAY IT WAS!!! Is it for no reason at all? Continue, please! |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 19:00 CDT
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good, cliff hanger, who'd jou kill???? |
Reviewed By: Phantom Duelist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:08 CDT
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Indeed, this is an eye catcher and already a cliffhanger in the prolouge. This promises to be interesting. I cant give you a rating just yet as theres not enough here to give me an idea of Originality but as of now, I wait for the first chapter |
Reviewed By: nikky On: June 16, 2003 16:38 CDT
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not sure yet but i like it. wonder who joey killed? and what the heck is joey going to do now? |
