| "A Feudal Discovery!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: alex On: July 05, 2003 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good !!! i still have one more thing to read |
Reviewed By: nicki On: June 22, 2003 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should make the chapters longer but it is pretty intresting
cool story idea
but sess is OOC
good creativy |
