| "Suicide Blonde" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Tamela On: June 19, 2004 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is the third time Ihave read this and it still makes me giddy! I LOVE IT! Great job! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Narusegawa Megumi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! A Tatsumi/Watari fic! I love that couple, they're just so... under played! I really enjoyed reading this! Good job! ~Narusegawa Megumi
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Reviewed By: Farfarello8 On: October 14, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic! I love the pairing and the way you were creative with them. Very nice!
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Reviewed By: nagumina On: August 08, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story wasn't nice. It was gorgeous. I could feel it on my skin! Mmm... Could I have some more please? (>_*) |
Reviewed By: Mangamazoku On: July 14, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you refernced the Hokkaido trip. I have that volume and love how those wonderful monkies that were in the hotsprings were mentioned, though i was hoping for a watari as being a monkey joke to be made after that. oh wells, all together great fic! The hotel upgrade is just a little too unrealistic, not only is the upgreaded room sound more like a penthouse, but the staffwoman would get in serious trouble for doing that too, but since it's a fic, it's perfecto! after all, it is PWP so i forgive it ^_^ I think this writting style has a lot of talent and growth potential, keep writting fics! I'm slightly grumpy that somebody beat me to the tsuzuki calling on the phone joke, but i'm a good sport, you posted before me! |
Reviewed By: Tosca On: June 24, 2003 12:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved this - a delightful example of everything a PWP should be. Funny, angsty, and HOT! |
Reviewed By: Galena Silveroak On: June 22, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my goodness, whirpools, strawberries, whipped cream and two yummy bishonen in a very yaoi way...what the heck is there not to love?! Find some fault here I ask you! The only reason why I gave the originality an 8 was because the hotel thing has been done before but that was it. The rest was brilliantly written and the plot flowed very smoothly. Please submit more Yami fics! |
Reviewed By: Mirai May On: June 20, 2003 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raven, simply put, that was amazing. I absolutly love the way you write. You describe everything so well the images in my mind were quite vivid. I loved the way you wrote them. I think you captured Tatsumi and Watari quite well. Even Tsuzuki and Hisoka at the end were great. That scene was really cute too. man.. and the lemon... Nice and hot. I do love hot tub scenes. ^.^ So sexy. You made me giggle and blush through the whole thing. Nice Job! |
Reviewed By: chanchan On: June 18, 2003 15:36 CDT
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I don't do ratings but if I did you'd get high marks. I'm going to have to read more of your stuff. This was very, very good. I bow at your feet. |
Reviewed By: Julie On: June 17, 2003 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shrieks* GAAH I love you Steph-neesan!! ^o^ this is a very, very enjoyable read!! It's probably the best TatsumixWatari lemon, if not fic, that I've read so far! Keep up the good work!!
-Julie |
Reviewed By: colie On: June 17, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was so sweet. i usually don't see Watari X Tatsumi Yaoi. very nice. can't wait to read more by you. and isn't fanfiction a piece of shit? i'm beginning to hate them! they would be a good site if they weren't so.... grrr, time to get off my soap box. good job with the fic, i'm glad i got to see the good version. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very descriptive, very thoughtfully written. I've always been jealous of your narrative, not too flowery, not too dry- just right. i love the bashfulness when they were getting undressed...so sweet and funny.
great job. |
