| "Hamtaro Generation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Shiny Zapdos On: September 05, 2003 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
What's T.W?
Great fanfic... |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 23:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can you read my other fanfic I wrote and review it? |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good...story but is VERY long... |
Reviewed By: T.W [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 05:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
It wasn't chopped off I haven't finished but you can read and review Boss and Bijou's reconcile.
It takes place were these stories left off but it was so long I put seprate.
You should try finding it on fanfiction.net it's better to read there it's kind of hard getting to look right here!!! |
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: July 01, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great i love it! i dont know what happened in chap 7 though. it looked like it got chopped off. oh well. anyway, keep writing i want to know what happens next!cya |
Reviewed By: T.W [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It may be weird to rate your own work but sometimes you toughtest criticis yoursef, anyway for those who think my stories are too long keep this in mind.
THIS IS NOT A CHAPTER STORY
this is an episodic story.
Well thanks I'll keep that in mind but what did you think of my other chpaters? You see they weren't ment to be chapters I was making a season of a series like a sitcom ya know a few episodes in one season?! Each chapter really episode that continues a story.
I was afraid if I put them seprately no one would get there all together. I've been trying to start a website so I could make that acspect more clear but I'm terrible with html!
please give it a chance!!!! |
