| "Ash & Sabrina first night" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Noober On: September 06, 2003 07:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! "Fuck milk"! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! This was so bad it was hilarious! |
Reviewed By: KYLE3094 On: July 13, 2003 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
what the hell is up with this fic, no periods, Thousands odd spelling and puncutal errors, AND WHO IN THE HELL CALLS CUM FUCK MILK,YOU BETTER DO A BETTER JOB ON CHAPTER TWO |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: July 09, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GAG* GO EASY ON YOU MY @$$!!! GAWD!!! THIS FIC SUCKED HOLY S#!T COVERED BALLS!!! GET A GOLD STAR ON YOUR KINDERGARTEN SPELLING TEST BEFORE WRITING ANOTHER FIC LIKE THIS!!! |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a pile of crap, man! please work in some punctuation, or at least some half decent sentences... |
Reviewed By: freakmanx2 On: July 05, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offence but this fic SUCKED!
(ok, ok a lot of offence) |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: July 02, 2003 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is your first, but this is disgusting! No full stops, no quotation and run-in sentences. It hardly makes any sense and you should know the difference between "four" and "for". |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: June 23, 2003 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there is a part two, please attempt to do something with the grammar, and make the lemon longer through elaboration. Furthermore, breast milk tastes bad, that is why only babies - who dont have any idea what tastes good or bad - drink it. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
0 out of 10
I know it was your first, but this is sad. No periods. Thousands od spelling and puncutal errors, things that wouldn't make sense even if there pere periods seperating the sentences. Gawd aful. Please correct this for part two |
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