| "Ash & Sabrina first night" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Zombiefic
Reviewed By: TB On: September 01, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is in the hands of one who borders on mental retardization. If your goal was to check whether people would accept a fic that sucked this much then you have a response. I hope it was purposeful because the simple sentences that one writes in kindergarten are better than any of the whatever-you-call-them sentences that you wrote. See Spot Run has more grammatical and spelling sense than in your entire little whatchamacallit.... -TB
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Title: ...No comment.
Reviewed By: Flamer On: July 09, 2005 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
...You suck. A lot. And that doesnt't even cover .111% of it.
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Reviewed By: Sayukii On: March 30, 2005 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh?! What was that?!
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Reviewed By: Dude, you suck BIG time!!! On: January 17, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD, WHAT THE FUCKIN HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!?!?! WHO CALLS CUM FUCK MILK!?!?! WERE YOU DRUNK OR ASLEEP WHEN YOU WROTE THIS? THERE IS A HUGE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN FOUR AND FOR, GO TO ONE OF THOSE SPECIAL ED CLASSES NEXT TIME OR AT LEAST GET A GOLD STAR ON YOUR SPELLING TEST!! DO US A FAVOR AND EITHER NEVER WRITE AGAIN OR DO MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER ON CHAPTER TWO!!! YOU ARE SUCH A FUCKIN DUMBASS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: December 13, 2004 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funniest thing ever
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Reviewed By: Kakashi On: October 31, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no writing ability whatsoever. Did you have your brain removed before you wrote this fic? If you plan on writing again, you should go to those special ed classes you've been skiping. If you ever write another fic like this, expect a virus.
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Reviewed By: Kakashi On: October 31, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no writing ability whatsoever. Did you have your brain removed before you wrote this fic. If you plan on writing again, you should go to those special ed classes you've been skiping. If you ever write another fic like this, expect a virus.
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Title: Ash & Sabrina first night
Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! YOU SUCK! FUCK MILK? WHAT IS UP WITH YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMER!? GEEZE THIS SUCKS! I have to agree with True Dark Zero and Fallin Leaves! Four and for are diffrent. Just don't write anymore.
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Reviewed By: Ridley On: October 08, 2004 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to go to a special ed ^#%^$ for brains. Do everyone a favor and never write again.
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Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: U. Suck On: June 19, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF? U r 1 hell of a friggin' sad person.
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Title: OMG LMAO!!!!!
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WERE YOU EVEN AWAKE WHEN YOU WROTE THIS FIC?!? WTF, FUCK MILK? LOL, OMG THIS IS LIKE THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER SEEN SINCE ME AND REDDEVIL7690 GOT THE IDEA FOR REDTV. OMG MAN YOU SUCK BIG TIME!!!!! but really, even though its your first I gotta say, IT IS THE WORST OF ALL KIND!!! IF YOU GET THE GRAMMAR AT LEAST FIXED UP, MAYBE YOULL GET A GOOD REVIEW! just look at my lemon fic, or red7690's those are good, but really, try WAY harder next time
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Title: horible fic
Reviewed By: Bit Cloud On: November 09, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic friggen SUCKED!!!
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Title: Not just you...
Reviewed By: Strikerflame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely atroscious fic. The spelling is horrible, there are no periods, I don't know what's up with the capitals...look, this fic was just horrible. I could barely even understand what was going on. And as if that wasn't bad enough, look at the reviews you brought on! The people who review your fic are right about as bad as you. They're complete hypocrites since they also can't spell, have run-on sentences, don't use periods...so not only is your fic bad, but your magnetism for other idiots is unbearable.
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Title: THAT SUCKED
Reviewed By: Patman On: September 30, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You suck at typing, spelling, or anything to do with fanfics. You need to go back to first grade and learn how to write and punctuate a fanfic. What the hell was "fuck milk". It's cum DUMBASS! Do better in chapter 2 for your own sake.
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Title: Blech
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was in poor taste, even by my jaded standards
Obviouslly this is a parody of your HATED chaaters
for if not then do the world a favour and kill your english teacher
plain and simple your grammar and the butcery of english as well as charater assasination proves that your a sick despot thats skreaming PLEASE ANALY RAPE ME TILL I'M DEAD
You make this lemon fic so bad that even gay guys or girls will be scared straight
For the love of god learn from your grameritacal and other mistakes, maybe repost it so it is comprehensable
if not then crawl back under the crud pile you spawned from and neve darken fanfiction sites again!
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