| "Ash & Sabrina first night" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ridley On: October 08, 2004 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to go to a special ed ^#%^$ for brains. Do everyone a favor and never write again.
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Title: WTF?
Reviewed By: U. Suck On: June 19, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF? U r 1 hell of a friggin' sad person.
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Title: OMG LMAO!!!!!
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG WERE YOU EVEN AWAKE WHEN YOU WROTE THIS FIC?!? WTF, FUCK MILK? LOL, OMG THIS IS LIKE THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER SEEN SINCE ME AND REDDEVIL7690 GOT THE IDEA FOR REDTV. OMG MAN YOU SUCK BIG TIME!!!!! but really, even though its your first I gotta say, IT IS THE WORST OF ALL KIND!!! IF YOU GET THE GRAMMAR AT LEAST FIXED UP, MAYBE YOULL GET A GOOD REVIEW! just look at my lemon fic, or red7690's those are good, but really, try WAY harder next time
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Title: horible fic
Reviewed By: Bit Cloud On: November 09, 2003 00:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic friggen SUCKED!!!
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Title: Not just you...
Reviewed By: Strikerflame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely atroscious fic. The spelling is horrible, there are no periods, I don't know what's up with the capitals...look, this fic was just horrible. I could barely even understand what was going on. And as if that wasn't bad enough, look at the reviews you brought on! The people who review your fic are right about as bad as you. They're complete hypocrites since they also can't spell, have run-on sentences, don't use periods...so not only is your fic bad, but your magnetism for other idiots is unbearable.
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Title: THAT SUCKED
Reviewed By: Patman On: September 30, 2003 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
You suck at typing, spelling, or anything to do with fanfics. You need to go back to first grade and learn how to write and punctuate a fanfic. What the hell was "fuck milk". It's cum DUMBASS! Do better in chapter 2 for your own sake.
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Title: Blech
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was in poor taste, even by my jaded standards
Obviouslly this is a parody of your HATED chaaters
for if not then do the world a favour and kill your english teacher
plain and simple your grammar and the butcery of english as well as charater assasination proves that your a sick despot thats skreaming PLEASE ANALY RAPE ME TILL I'M DEAD
You make this lemon fic so bad that even gay guys or girls will be scared straight
For the love of god learn from your grameritacal and other mistakes, maybe repost it so it is comprehensable
if not then crawl back under the crud pile you spawned from and neve darken fanfiction sites again!
Shadow Megatron's opinion DECEPTICONS OBLITERATE THIS ATTROCITY |
Reviewed By: Noober On: September 06, 2003 07:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! "Fuck milk"! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA! This was so bad it was hilarious! |
Reviewed By: KYLE3094 On: July 13, 2003 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
what the hell is up with this fic, no periods, Thousands odd spelling and puncutal errors, AND WHO IN THE HELL CALLS CUM FUCK MILK,YOU BETTER DO A BETTER JOB ON CHAPTER TWO |
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero On: July 09, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
*GAG* GO EASY ON YOU MY @$$!!! GAWD!!! THIS FIC SUCKED HOLY S#!T COVERED BALLS!!! GET A GOLD STAR ON YOUR KINDERGARTEN SPELLING TEST BEFORE WRITING ANOTHER FIC LIKE THIS!!! |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a pile of crap, man! please work in some punctuation, or at least some half decent sentences... |
Reviewed By: freakmanx2 On: July 05, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offence but this fic SUCKED!
(ok, ok a lot of offence) |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: July 02, 2003 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is your first, but this is disgusting! No full stops, no quotation and run-in sentences. It hardly makes any sense and you should know the difference between "four" and "for". |
Reviewed By: Demetz On: June 23, 2003 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there is a part two, please attempt to do something with the grammar, and make the lemon longer through elaboration. Furthermore, breast milk tastes bad, that is why only babies - who dont have any idea what tastes good or bad - drink it. |
Reviewed By: RedDevil7690 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
0 out of 10
I know it was your first, but this is sad. No periods. Thousands od spelling and puncutal errors, things that wouldn't make sense even if there pere periods seperating the sentences. Gawd aful. Please correct this for part two |
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