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Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why...? Why...did I rate this story a 10...because it's GREAT...!!!
I must say though...your food fetish is starting to concern me...hahhaha...but we'll get to that later...
Man! Goku's trying to spoil all Vegeta's fun...! I mean who wouldn't want to hear in graphic detail the how-to's of male saiyan pregnancies...especially at a wedding...hahahaha!!! And right after Goten and Trunks has informed everyone of their secret love relationship!!! Ah, come on...it would be so much fun...no one would ever forget this wedding...hahahaha!!! Besides, it might be more then Chichi could take...it might kill her...oh my wouldn't that be a shame...?
WOW...!!! Radditz and Nappa were lovers!!! Damn that Frieza...he destroyed so many lives... At last the secret is out...Nappa's death was planned...he missed his mate and wanted to join him. Vegeta wasn't just being a *cold heartless bastard*!!!
Hmmmm..is Vegeta in better shape then Goku...interesting...just for the record...Kakarott...short people can walk fast...care to race...hahahaha!!!!
I see Goku has got himself a job...why to go Goku...!!! Not to mention...it's *perfect*...teaching children martial arts. Yes, indeed the perfect job for the powerfull gentle Saiyan...he's so proud of himself and he should be...like anyone, he wants to share his happiness with another...someone he cares about...
You know sometimes I leave my bank book at home too...
Do we(you) have a thing about food...???? I'm sick just reading all the stuff they ate...hahaha!!! I like my waffles with lots of pecans,maple syrup then topped with hashbrowns...hmmmmm
Sometimes you just want to slap somebody...yeah, I figured those tellers weren't saying nice things about Goku...but you noticed how she changed her tune when she found out *who* he was and that he did actually have a great deal of money(as well as good looks)... It's really a shame and a sad truth, that there are people like that out there...haven't they ever heard.."don't judge a book by it's cover" or "judge a man untill you've walked a mile in his shoes...I hope Vegeta tears them a new as....(sorry...all most got carried away there} or at least put the fear of *Vegeta* in them...!!!!
Once again Goku has jumped to the wrong conclusions...now his happy day has turned into a sad day. Maybe with a good night's sleep he'll feel better tomorrow when they spar? Hopefully Vegeta will have time to stop by the bank before it closes...*evil smirk*
I love this story...I look forward to it every Wednesday!!!! I hope your muse like's the review...keep the muses happy and they keep writing...hahahaha!!!
Oh by the way...I did reread chapter 4...*smiles*
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Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: July 16, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really luv this story, its great. I hope goku and vegeta get together soon. write again soon. |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really in love with this story! The emotion that you've infused into it is wonderful!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Blaze On: July 06, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Me again! ^_^ ok i loved this chapter there getting better and better. and i agre you'd think vegeta would of caught on by now.... and people think gokus naive. anyway keep up the good work^_^ i'm going to go eat! it's all your fault.... |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still loving the fic. Can't wait for the next chapter, and also for the wedding! I bet it will be beatiful (with a few humorous incidents, I'm sure!).
Keep up the great writing, and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another interesting chapter..!!!
Let me start by saying...I like the little headers, whenever the scene would change...very clever!!!
Pushy clerk...? Hmmm...I have a few different words to describe her...hahaha...she's lucky to still be alive...Vegeta has really mellowed...of course he doesn't want to upset Kakarott!
It's such a shame the way they want each other, but feel they aren't good enough for the other...*wipes imaginary tears from eyes*...I'm sure they will fine thier way to each other...
The seatbelt scene was funny and cute...hmmm I wonder...if it had been someone else in that seat with the same problem would Vegeta have buckled them in...or growled then toss them out of his car...hahaha!! Ohhhh, by the way...nice choice in cars...Vegeta is differently a Porsche~~
That's an interesting twist you've added..Krillen being sick and dying from cancer...this time Goku couldn't save him or any of the other against the ravages of time...but Vegeta could!!! And yet he keeps this information to himself...I hope the others find out who to thank for there returned prime and a longer life...I bet they would be speechless and amazed!!!
Lucky for Yamcha, Vegeta doesn't know all of Earth's slang...to bad!!! I always love it when Vegeta beat's the HELL out of Yamcha...maybe later...hahahaha!!! (just kidding) Besides, it does make Goku feel better knowing he's not the only that doesn't always understand...
Is Trunk so in love that he's lost his mind? Attempting to steal food from his father...*tilts head*...how long has Trunk lived with his father...hahaha!!!
Poor Goku...he's not a moocher and he has what he needs...well except Vegeta, but that's coming...*wink* Beside Vegeta wouldn't love him for his possesions...he all ready knows Kakarott has nothing...hahahaha!!!
*stomps foot*!!! Yes, I noticed the meaning of sharing food between Saiyan, but Damn It I wanted to mention it to you...hahahaha!!!
Great Chapter!!! Long too...I was so caught up in the story I didn't realize how long untill I got to the end...*smiles* I loved it!!!!!
Can hardly wait for number 4
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Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
if i review--will it make you post faster? *laughs* i like the way this is going, i wanna see those two sexy saiyajins get it on! and, will this be a VegitaxGoku fic or GokuxVegita--i think its so much sexier when Vegita is the dominant one! he's too perfect for it! and especially if Goku would have his little baby!! *gets happier* how kawaii that would be! anyway, i hope you continue with this soon. |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, now that Goku knows Bulma's not marrying Vegeta, he's more then happy to be fitted and attend the wedding...even if he doesn't know "which side he dresses on"...LOL!!!
Did the boys forget about Vegeta enhanced hearing and smell...of course he knew they were together...and best of all he doesn't mind...after all he would like to have a 'Son' of his own...hahahaha!!!
I like this softer Vegeta, he hasn't killed anyone or blasted anything...yet!!!
Looking forward to learning about Saiyan male pregnancies and then reading about a pregnant Saiyan male....
I also don't care much for Chichi, so what she likes or dosen't like means nothing to me. If she won't like the fact that her youngest is in love with Trunks...how will she feel about Goku and Vegeta...can we type 'stroke'...hahahaha!!!
Thanks for the mail letting me know you had updated.
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Reviewed By: me! On: June 27, 2003 02:51 CDT
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I was just hoping that those who do review would leave me their email addresses so i can thank them personally. it means alot that people took the time to leave their thoughts and opinions for my fic. especially when i mentioned no one had to.
thanks everyone! |
Reviewed By: Blaze On: June 27, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow nicly wtitten i never thought anyone would put bulma and green bean together...it too cute =^.^= but anyway... it's a great fic and i'm also a big chi chi hater abnd up for chi chi bashing. maybe you could put some in later chapters. i'd love to know when you update. e-mail me and let me know vegeta1o2@yahoo.com and if anyone else sees the e-mail mail me if you want. well this girls got to get some sleep! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: June 26, 2003 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!!!!! write again soon, cant wait! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 00:33 CDT
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Hey nice original idea! I've never read a fic with Bulma/Piccolo! Good job!
Please update soon!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was spellbound...
Very Nice!!! Interesting,humorous...poor Kakarott...jumping to the wrong conclusion. He's suffering for no reason *shake head*...
Piccolo and Bulma getting married? It'a an interesting idea.
Vegeta...what can I say...? I like the way you are writing his character...there's more to Vegeta...he not just a murdering, heartless, bastard...! He's changed and you write it well,,,!!! (I'm so pathetic...hahahaha}
Anyway...I like it and just for the record...I'm 44, so I have no problems with the lemmony aspects of this story. I agree...love is love...who's to tell me or anyone else who they can love and mate with regardless of gender...besides *smirks* I love Vegeta and Kakarott pairings. I thinks they are perfect for each other...
Could you let me know when you update? I read so much and so many different sites sometimes it hard to keep up...hahahaha!!!
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Reviewed By: teengohanluva4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 15:32 CDT
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i think the idea's gr8. Piccolo and bulma being together is a bit weird but i like weird, maybe you cud put a bit more about their relationship in there as i kinda would like to know more about how they got together. Gr8 story line though and i've always loved Goten/Trunks so wahay!! keep up the brill work and get another chap up quick!!!! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 13:53 CDT
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Good so far! Some of your sentances are a little choppy, but overall you have a very nice writing style. I look forward to the next chapter. |
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