Reviewed By: Xeledra On: June 29, 2003 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to work on your spelling or at least use the spell checker. The idea is good and your sentence construction is lovely. It's just the bad spelling that keeps tripping it up. For some reason, although the plot is okay, I didn't really feel emotionally connected to it. Maybe a little bit more power and detail behind the feelings in the scenario would help. |
