Reviewed By: i_live_under_tamahomes_bed_na_no_da [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Sakuza "Suzaku" misspelled or is it a made up idea for this fanfic? Also...when you put Japanese words in diologue such as "nani", people who don't know any Japanese won't understand. If you're gonna write your fanfic in english, make it all in english. But don't worry, it isn't too severe to do this in fan fiction, but god, it is in subtitled anime. ^_^ Great fan fic idea |
