| "Final Fantasy 10 - Other World" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: combustingleaves [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really fun to read =3 i liked the insest part my self ;) write more plese!!!
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Reviewed By: jcmver2oo4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yes, the nature of lemons. Plant a seed, a tree grows... Wait, That's not what I'm talking about! Seriously, everything was great (For a lemon, anyway. See my bio.) until you introduced incest. INCEST, for frikin' Snowball's sake! It threw my interest out the boat (pun intended). And yes, I'm talking religion. Blah, blah, blah. But it really almost made me puke. (Call Dell, we need a new computer.) It was very long, though. Some people make a one-shot the size of a nut (no pun intended). You stuck to your theme, and you seem to have potential in writing a more involving story. (Note I said "Story".) Maybe something without bro/sis, maybe?
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel(Too lazy to sign in) On: February 14, 2004 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously think you are the best at writing these types of stories even if other people do not appreciate them screw them then...Literally...JK! Wow I have a poor sense of humour...Oh well...
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Title: GO RIKU
Reviewed By: SHIVVAA!!! On: September 19, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO RIKU! BE A SLUT!! I THOUGHT THIS FIC WAS KIKASS CAUSE OF WEIRD LEMON SCENES AND THE INCENT.very well told fic and continue i wanna here more !!
(by: ALMIGHTY SHIVVA!) |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 19, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok the thing with Rikku's brother was weird(though I'm use to reading about incest)but the story was well done,creative and just plain good in the lemon department.A+ :) |
