| "A Walk Through the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 09:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Iyasu (not signed in) On: October 11, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to have longer chapters, but other than that, you don't really have any problems. I think all first-time fics are short. Could you update? I want to know what the surprise is! ^^
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Reviewed By: Ekimozo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Your writing isn't bad! But why won't you update??? Try to get your chappies to be a little longer! What surprise exactly is there on the other side? |
