| "Yami no hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: al On: December 09, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny fic. as for the lemon being your first. sure it is. unless you read lemon fics like me.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner(not signed in) On: October 06, 2003 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was cute! I liked it! Bakura finally admits it! Woot! hehehe... The only one thing you might wan to do i draw out the lemon a little more... I had to learrn that too! But other than that it's good! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: The Darkness Itself [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh, I'm only on the first chappie, but I'm gonna read more...
yes, I know who Miho is...
*song* Miho and Honda! Sittin' on a tree! K I S S I N G! First comes LOVE! Then comes MARRI- *song fades*
heh.... ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 16:20 CDT
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Cuteness...even though Bakura-sama is OOC..it fits for the story! ^^ Lemon is good...very good! ^_^
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: Malik Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 09:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Ryou and Bakura are one of my favorite pairs! please write more! ^_^ Yay! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: June 22, 2003 18:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a great fic. Seriously. I loved it. ^_^ Poor Ryou-chan has to be sick. Bakura makes it better. I loved the lemon it was good. Ja ne! Good fic! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey--
awww....very kawaii bakura/ryou story. i truly enjoyed it and nice job on the lemon...not too bad!
hope to see more from you soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
