| "Tentative" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Niffe_24 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 06:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kewlness! I wait to see more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Youkosgirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!! It`s so awesome!!!! I love it!!! Bakura and Yami are so cute together!!!
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 10:43 CST
Comment/Review:
-_-U One problem---BAKURA IS MINE!!!!!! otherwise, its a good story
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Reviewed By: dogsruleW [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooh!!!!!!! This is soooooooooo good! I am the fourth review! That means you continue! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! This is TOTALLY my favorite pairing! Please continue it soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Twilight On: June 22, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is unusual and I have not heard of many Yami/Bakura stories. Please update soon! :) |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definately interesting and I want to know how Yami convinces Bakura to sleep with him. Anyway please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Akuro [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
The plot isn't the most original, but overall, it's a nice start, and I enjoyed reading it. There's such a shortage of Yami no Bakura x Yami no Yuugi that it's not funny. You wrote Bakura fairly in character, though Yami might be a little OOC.
I caught a few mistakes, though they were mainly punctuation errors. There were a few minor problems with spelling: ie. intelegent should be intelligent. Other than that, it's pretty good. Keep writing. |
