| "Bad memories" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: valkeyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a great story but it could really use some revising.
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Reviewed By: margo On: June 23, 2005 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the story and i hope that you continue it.i would have been sooo enbarest if that was me that all the people where looking at.i got enbarest gust reading it i hade to stop for a little before i could stort reading again.
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Title: SPACE
Reviewed By: Yuki San [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, it was really hard to read the story! I get lost in the really short paragraphs, how am I supposed to read the bible in one paragraph? Please shorten your paragraphs...
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: November 08, 2003 02:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahhaha its great!!! keep on going!! :)
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Reviewed By: Jester1979 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Story, although I found some grammar and spelling mistakes, for example a line said "Another wards" I think you meant it to say "In other words" Other then that it was a good story,and I hope you get enough reviews to motivate you to continue. |
