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| "Abnormal Lemons" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only read a few of these stories,but they are excellent.You are a very talented writer,yes,I've read a few of your other stories also.I really loved "I Never Knew" and "Youth".Just reviewing to tell you to get up the good work!Thanks! Love, Ash
| Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 22:58 CST
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peggi-.............*cries uncontrollably* poor ryou! *huggles him* Ryou-*can't breath* it..was...only a...fanfic! peggi-Oh, okay then! *lets go* likied this chappie although I DID cry!
| Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, that was so sweet! i loved it! i read the whole thing and never got bored. you got the first ten i've given on ANYTHING in my entire life! yay you! it was really good, i thouroughly enjoyed it!
| Reviewed By: JK On: January 03, 2004 20:32 CST
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I am going to hate myself for this, but is a chapter with Bonz out of the question?
| Reviewed By: sea-breeze On: December 17, 2003 09:18 CST
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if u want a real challange and thnk u can handle it how bout a Peagusis/Grandpa pearing NOW that is abnormal and if that isnt abnormal then i dont kno what is!!!
| Reviewed By: al On: December 14, 2003 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry but i don't think i have the guts to read some(most) of the abnormal lemons. Pegasus literally gave me nightmares and i don't have the stomach for yami/bakura or bakura/seto or honda/joey and i'll stop ranting. i am looking forward to ryou/yugi. the ones with good stories about those two never have lemons to go with it. must be the innocence thingy. i like your other lemons minus pegasus(its the charcacter not story!).
| Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 19:16 CDT
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ok u may have 2 many requests but...pweeze do a malik/yami fic i dont care how u do it just please write 1 i cant find many of them!
| Reviewed By: sweetcandie On: October 12, 2003 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This stuff is great. You know I wouldn't mind seeing a Pegasus/Yami Bakura lemon. I have never actually seen this pairing before. Is that abnormal enough for you. Ha ha ha. The guys should remain in character. Also it would be cool to see these two in a vampiric setting, you know with Pegasus and his shirts and Yami Bakura having a love for blood. No love and mushy stuff please, they are just good ol' fantasy partners. ^____^ Please consider it.
| Title: Cool
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There cool stories so far. I really like them. I was wondering if maybe you could do a Yami/ Marik Romance. maybe start off as Marik try to rape Yami for revenge. But some how they both start to fall in love.
| Reviewed By: sapphire On: July 12, 2003 16:15 CDT
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i would love to read a romance any time setting on yugi and baruka or yugi and malik, i have search high and low and no one ever seems to write about this couple - and as i can't write i have to beg and plead others to do it - so here's the begging and pleading. | Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 19:01 CDT
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Oh this is gonna be GREAT FUN!!! Ok you didn't mention whether you would or wouldn't write about Otogi (And I refuse to EVER watch a dubbed Anime so I don't know his English name, but I think it starts with a 'D' if that helps. Sorry.) With that black hair and those green eyes... *Melt* I just don't think he get's enough screen time and he is hardly ever written about, so I would really love a story with him.
I want the pairings to be Otogi and Yami Bakura, (As in Yami Bakura in all of his voilent blood thirsty glory, just the way I love him, not the 'tamed' version I normally read about.) and Ryou and Malik.
Alright long and detailed description of what I want you say? Alright I'll give ya all the detail I can!
The setting would be modern day of course and poor Otogi is just coming home from a long days work when he accidentally runs into a ticked off Yami Bakura who just 'happened' to be watching him. Through a little help of some well placed ropes and gags (and maybe a little roughing up) 'Convinces' Otogi to take a walk with him back to his and Ryou's place. Upon arrival Ryou is to be found in a very revealing little S&M number (up to you as long as it's tight, barely legal, and leather.) wearing a collar and chain held by our oh so hateable, sexy and angsty (we love him that way) Malik. Who has bound him hand and foot to a wall and is currently cutting small slits in Ryou's chest with the dagger portion of the Millennium Rod and licking up the blood while Ryou begs and pleads for more and is profusely thanking his Malik-Sama. (Yes I know I'm Sadistic, No it isn't something I seek counseling for, and yes I know I should.)
Yami Bakura tells Otogi to "just ignore them" and takes him upstairs where he promptly ties him spread-eagled (arms and legs out) to his four poster bed while Otogi struggles to get away. A whip and a dagger are then somehow used to make him behave himself. Yami Bakura then blindfolds him and uses the knife to cut open poor Otogi's clothes.
"I've wanted you for a very long time...now I will claim you as mine."
"I'll never be yours..."
"By the end of the night you'll be begging me to claim you, and will address me with respect as your Master...."
Yadda yadda yadda, I think you can tell where I am going. I want there to be spanking, flogging, hot wax, biting, maybe some blood letting, and lots and lots of rough domination. At first I want Otogi to resist but eventually realize how much he is enjoying what Yami Bakura doing to him and begs for more.
Emotionalism, all the smutty descriptions you can handle, and maybe some random POVs' would be appreciated.
I hope that's enough to go on, and I hope I didn't scare you too bad. Sorry my mind can really be a scary place. This is a lemon I have been fantacising about lately but I just haven't gotten up the guts to write it.
(Not to mention I am writing three other stories and my 7 books and I work 6 days a week so I have NO TIME!)Please make my little S&M hentai fantasy come true! PLEASE!!!! Aragato! | Reviewed By: American BadAss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 18:11 CDT
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Common. "abnormal lemons" you say, yet all the lemons you always see are yaoi. So tell me if its as "abnormal" as you honestly say.
Oh well, if yaoi you say, then write me either a Tristan/Marik or a Bakura/Malik. I would like it in normal times and full-blown fast-pace hard-core lemon, meaning nothin all mushy and crap, so genre: General/Hentai (DUHDUHDUHDUH XD). Mah name's Manda. Thank you much, excelent story idea. | Reviewed By: starjewel On: June 30, 2003 14:37 CDT
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how about a angst/romance-lemon with all six : malik/marik/ryou/bakura/yami/yugi. sounds like a challenge? well I figure they all like each other(of course the yami has a stronger feeling for his own hikari) but they sleep together, been with one another. And one day the hikari' s get kidnapped and raped, beaten, um....(i'm not good at angst stuff, so maybe you might have some ideas.) but it's up to the yami's to find them. um....they get into a lot of trouble on the way.( I mean three fine looking guys in a world of yaoi- come on work with me you know what I'm talking about when I say "trouble" right!?) well I hope that's enough detail it can be a one-shot if that's possible. if you don't like my idea that's ok.*sniff* I'll survive on being.....being....REJECTED*burst into tears* *sniff* please consider. I think its a good idea, but I'm not a writer. I putting my dream in your capable writing. please don't fail me. Think about. thanks. oh and great stories, that shows me you're capable for the job. | Reviewed By: LonelyFox On: June 30, 2003 09:55 CDT
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May I ask for one? Okay, I would love to see a Malik/Bakura, pretty well plotless, with Bakura tied up, the two of them playing a gae that Malik set up through Seto, where Bakura has to figure out who it is that he's with to gain control. I don't care if Bakura figures it out or not, but if he does, make it be a long time before he figures it out. I would write this myself, but my computer's messed up and I'm stuck on my dad's, so I can't write lemons.x.x. | Reviewed By: Dea On: June 22, 2003 23:39 CDT
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My absolute FAVOURITE Yugioh pairing is Honda/Jounouchi. But for some reason, Hon/Jou fics are really hard to find. I don't know why. I mean, it seems like the obvious pairing to me! I guess I'm just weird. Sigh.
Anyway, if you could write a Hon/Jou fic and feed this small, neglected yaoi fandom, so that it will grow healthy and strong and TAKE OVER THE WORLD so that there will be Hon/Jou fics EVERYWHERE BWA HA HA HA HA HA!!! (ahem) it would be deeply appreciated.
Some romance, some humour, not overly mushy, and NO non-con, please. I don't much care who the seme is (although I lean towards Honda, for some reason, but I also really like it when they take turns), so long as they both enjoy themselves and neither of them is really girly uke.
Modern times. Maybe they could slip off into the woods on Pegasus' island? Or maybe Honda shared Jounouchi's room at Pegasus' castle, at least for one night (after all, Honda, Anzu and Bakura weren't expected, they all kinda had to sneak in. ^_^).
Arigato gozaimasu, and I really hope you'll choose this one. (Please?) | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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