| "The Exfoilation of Perenial Beings" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: love_anime_91 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've spelt exfoilation wrong..... itz exfoliation..... believe me.... so go fix it other than that.... couple grammar mistakez and what not..... but... the fic is SOSOSOSO GOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!! lol....
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 00:27 CST
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Wow, I love this vamp fic! Yugi as a slayer rocks! I do hope there really is a sequal to this... it's just too awsome to leave alone. Especially with an ending like that! You do so well with vamp fics... don't ever stop, please!
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Title: *GushGushGushGushGush*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: September 04, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Glen Cook's "Garrett the Detective" novels, meets "Blade", meets "Yu-Gi-Oh!" I must say, hard ass Yugi vampire slayer rocks, and he's insane to boot. I love this story to pieces, and have a tendency to re-read it now and then. There are just some things that get burned into your mind, like the way characters act, or things that are said. Seto with a southern accent trying to molest Yugi. The macho bike races. The insane little hentai voice in Yugi's head. Foreshadowing of things to come. Yami being a tease, and a blunt one at that, and I will never forget his comment about masturbating which turned to a running gag. Evil morning perkiness. And one line that will forever live in my mind, "The trench coat was not for show. The trench coat was to hide the show." Throw in the angsty drama and it's just one of those stories that you fall in love with. But probably what I like even more is watching you style develop as the story goes on. By the end you're talking to YGO characters in your "author notes" and some of the names get fixed. Yes I'm odd, I'm one of those people that likes it when writers talk to the readers in their notes. Yeah I'm gushing; it's just that damn good.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka (Damn thing won't let me sign in On: February 24, 2004 08:47 CST
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You've read Laurel K. Hamilton, don't you. The trench coat comment and the weapon description clinched it >P
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it ^_^ plz continue^_^ Yami as a vampire nice
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 04:55 CST
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I forgot to add some thing in my other review question how did Yami become a vampire? Vampire Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Vampire Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE BEST VAMPIRE STORY I'VE READ!!! PLEASE MAKE MORE STORYS LIKE THAT WITH SONIC THE HEDGEHOG, INU-YASHA ECT MAYBE i CAN BE IN YOUR STORY IF IT'S OKAY WITH YOU.THANKS Vampire Inuyasha
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Title: Chu!
Reviewed By: Queen Leo Starblazer of the Chaos Riders On: November 25, 2003 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha-ha! Highly unusual and enjoyable!!! I've only read up 2 chapter two, but.. me like. HA-ha! I am impressed.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 00:59 CDT
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"WHAT THE F***" was the first thing to come to MY mind!!!!!!!! *eyes glow red* gimmi new chapter *husky and deep voice* *eyes glow through shadows as she comes.... HA! GOT YOU! ^-^ get a new chapter up though, ONEGAI!!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! when WAS the last time you updated anyway *thoughtful* UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE noooooooooooowwwwwww!!!!!! UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE ^_-UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPD ATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE. i think you get it ^_- ciao, you're SO gonna on my fav's list
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Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: July 25, 2003 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is an unusual ending!!! I like the last few chapters, and I hope Yugi will be better in the future!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lauren |
Reviewed By: Caliane On: July 24, 2003 22:59 CDT
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I love it! It reminds me of Laurell K. Hamilton's earlier stuff, before it got crappy. Great read! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Dragon On: July 24, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAY!!! SEQUELS!!! I CAN'T WAIIIIIIIIIIT!!! ONEGAI HURRY BECAUSE I LOVE THIS FIC!!! |
Reviewed By: StarMagician [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 14:22 CDT
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*is speechless*
You better post soon or else...
Just kidding. XD Love your story!
Is there a happy ending to this? |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 02:28 CDT
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HOW COULD YOU!! Hurry up and post the sequel already! Please! You are evil! Post it soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 21:33 CDT
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Wow! I missed quite a few chapters! I really like this story! That was amusing when Yuugi fell down the stairs after he figured Yami out. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what Yami has in mind for Yuugi. |
Reviewed By: Moonlitspire On: July 23, 2003 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! how could you just leave it right THERE?? you evil cliffie writer you...^_~
You're story is sooo good! ...although...that last chapter was just about the most revolting stuff i've ever read...it's all good. The suspense is killing me. Please please write more soon! byyee! |
Reviewed By: Kannie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 17:20 CDT
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Font poor yugi........alrite u got me hung....I WANNA C THE NEXT CHAPPI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pouts*.........i crave for more!!!!.............................plz updtae soon.......><
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Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats it? No more precious chapters? *Pouts* gee, what I'd do . . . oh well, great job so far! |
Reviewed By: Zee On: July 23, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it is amazing. It's so different from every other vampire story I have read from yugioh. I like how you make Yugi a strong person and not just some whiny wimp like most authors do. He can hold his own which is very original. I can't wait until you get another chapter out. Your grammar and spelling is also great just a few mistakes here or there that. Good job I cannot wait for another chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Moonchild On: July 23, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are getting more and more interesting. Please don't make us wait for too long. |
Reviewed By: Shade A On: July 23, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was the most vile and disgusting thing that I have ever read in my life... I liiiike it *giggles insanely*
On a lighter-
Voice inside Shade's head: and on a less INSANE NOTE!!!
Shut up, you. On a lighter note *glares at VISH, as if daring it to interrupt* this is very well written! I like it!!! I hope you continue soon!
~Shade and Vish~ |
Reviewed By: StarMagician [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:12 CDT
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I just read chapter 10 and wow, you're good.
This is one of the best vamp fic I have read. It's very different.
Please update soon!
Cliffhangers kill me. |
Reviewed By: Meaty Mc Meatness On: July 23, 2003 02:21 CDT
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Yumm... all that description of blood and meat gives me a hankering for some filet mignon.
*sees everyone staring* WHAT!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 01:04 CDT
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Yay, an update! I lovie this story. More Yami/Yugi-ness please! Update soon!
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 03:33 CDT
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Ohh. More Yami/Yugi-ness please! Lemon... :) Please update soon. I love this story. :P
~~~Cherry~~~ |
Reviewed By: Megumi05 On: July 21, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice ^^
keep going, I want to see more Yami/Yugi lemon ~_^
Is Yami a vampire or am I reading too far into things?
I like your style of writing, I haven't read a good lemon like that in a while ^^ |
Reviewed By: Worsel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I love this story, It's awesome! I always end up forgetting whatever has gone wrong in my day and just laugh when I read this. Thanks for writing such a spiffy story!
~Lossa Love~ |
Reviewed By: Ryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 22:15 CDT
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Ooooooooooo! *squeal* Good, good, good, wonderful! I love your story! I really like Yugi's character and that he can be a bit of a mass murderer (of vampires)! *imagines Yugi with guns and knives* Hehe!*snickers* But ya know, I keep thinking that Yami's a vampire. Hmmmmm... Anyway, update soon! Soon, ya hear! |
Reviewed By: Silver Lily aka Blood Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear GODS you have to continue this. I LOVE it! REALLY!!! I do I do I do!!! |
Reviewed By: Yuki Tenshi On: July 16, 2003 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I missed such a good story for so long, so anyway, I spent a couple of hours reading everything...
Hmm...I did have a sneaking suspicion about Yami being a vamp from the first time you mentions him having cool skin. Maybe you sent out subliminal messages in your summaries? lol It really explains a lot though! His cool skin, his...seductiveness, his reaction when Yuugi told him about the massacre, his not going out in daylight on weekends, AND his morning perkiness ^__^...maybe he just gets up early cuz he cant leave Yuugi's house after dawn with the sun and all.
Wonder why Yuugi hasnt figured out all this yet...Oh well. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out he has 2 vamp stalkers. HAHA! I can't wait for more! Update soon! Oh yes, and great story! |
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