Reviewed By: KrystalClear On: November 13, 2002 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. I loved your portrayal of Youji. I loved the little puns you put into your fic occasionally... like "fuck. no, they'd already done that. oh darn." (I'm going by memory here... srry^^) I don't know. There was this certain quality in this fic that made it impossible for me to not to like it. It was almost overwhelmingly chaste. ... Not the right word, perhaps, seeing this is an NC fic. But still, the way you described... not necessarily their thoughts, but their acts... and thoughts too, occasionally, now that I think about it. Okay, now I'm rambling - but that's just an indication of how much I enjoyed reading this. ^^ see you! |
