| "Crossing Paths" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: *append
Reviewed By: xenosoldier_solo On: January 11, 2004 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Might've been too harsh earlier. YOu show potential, but random comments do not great novels make. So, apologies, but again you can do better.
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Title: -_-()
Reviewed By: xenosoldier_solo On: January 11, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It saddens me to see so little effort put into something, a novel or a fan fiction should have a soul. It should not be simply something to be toyed with. This is unfortunate, but hopefully it will be a learning experience. Try again, you can do better.
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Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 10:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep up the funny :)GRALNAK
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Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 11, 2003 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
You had Hiei, ah Hiei, who could hate him? (Retorical question). Notify I did not spell a word right... I think, Which not to pick on you Joshy boy since others are, but, spelling doesn't matter as long as you can figure out what they're saying. Besides usally when someone miss spells a word most people look over it correcting it not knowing that they did (The readers that is). Enough picking on you, You're not that special *sparkle sparkle* (please don't account this as mean if you do.) Now to the Star of the writing, I like your story I didn't get lost at all which is something I like. Keep writing good writer person.
Bye (Oh and lets have more of Hiei in there, *not getting hurt*) Who said that? |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tran, Dun stop this fic. Josh is a dick. spelling doesn't matter. he's the one talking about spelling and he misspells originality, prob. a typo, but he still misspelled it. I like it's cute. And amusing. I've no complaints so keep writing, and update soon dude!
Purple |
Reviewed By: Tran [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 12:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I screwed up on some spelling.. big deal... I've never seen any like this I thought this was my own idea.. sorry.... I'll cancel it if you want me to and i'll go back to my other fan fic on ff.net which i can't even do anymore because the Yu-Gi-Oh! Series took such a big turn I can't continue it... so you're stuck with this. |
Reviewed By: Josh On: June 30, 2003 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
and dont bitch! |
Reviewed By: Josh On: June 30, 2003 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think its just that this is very strange and out of the ordinary and the spelling isnt that good at all besides ive already seen a portal story not much origionality |
Reviewed By: Star Nymph On: June 27, 2003 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
heehee
Vash
heehee
well keep up the good work, pal! |
