| "Thisbe in Repose" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfax On: August 21, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Very nice! The story was amazing, and I really liked reading your notes as well. It's nice to see someone actually thinking about the characters, instead of automatically spitting out Inuyasha + Kagome = Kikyou is evil and must die. Thank you for an insightful, enjoying read. =] |
Reviewed By: Renze On: July 07, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done, even though it's a bit... flowerly, as Ithilwen put it. But it's really a beautiful piece... I think I might like Kikyo a bit more now! ^__^ I salute you! *salutes* |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
It gets a bit flowery in places, but the style -- interspersed with half-thoughts -- gets quite chilling. You've covered Kikyo's fascination with Inuyasha as a half-demon, as a human, and you've even hinted at the full-youkai behind his eyes. This shows actual caring, without ignoring the levels of mistrust that must have been there for Naraku to exploit. |
Reviewed By: pyramus On: June 20, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your knowledge of myth is refreshing and intriguing. the irony in the title is delicious. i liked the choppy imagery imbedded into the narrative. unique and very nice
yay!
write more! |
Reviewed By: hoshino On: June 21, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this thing! i used to hate kikyou, but this may have convinced me. she seemed like such a bitch in the anime and manga, but this is new insight. I never thought of real view point before. the thing with the auras was really cool. I'm glad thatt ur a kag/inu fan too! this was beautiful |
