| "In the heat of the night" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: yamimylove (to lazy to log in) On: May 16, 2005 20:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
are you gonna update again? well, it been a 2 years already!!!
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Reviewed By: ghfhgtd On: April 29, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, its good, I think, but i really do prefer the Shun-Hyoga couple
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Reviewed By: j_mame-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i really loved this fic cuz it had one of my favorite pairings shaka and ikki.oh and nicely done lemons too!i'm such a hentai^_^
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Reviewed By: SilverSmutter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good, I like the interactions and the sex. Hope you haven't given up, there aren't many Saint Seiya writers in English, I will look forward to more chapter.
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Reviewed By: Animom [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 22:34 CST
Comment/Review:
yes, yes, it's a lemon, but the spiritual aspects you are adding are what make it different ... I assume that we will also see a Hyouga/Shun chapter? Also the setup of the mystery with the grandmother of the children on the bus shows that you have ambitions for this story beyond just PWP, good for you!
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Title: In the heat of the night: Shaka and Ikki's night ( Chapter 2 )
Reviewed By: Verochan On: September 25, 2003 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, Please keep doing it as soon as possible, i love your fic. Please continue the part of Ikki and Skaha. See ya
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Title: Please Post More Chapters :)
Reviewed By: Angel_Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story, are you gonna write more? If so please do, are you take requests? Normally I wouldn't ask but I feel I have to other wise you might think, there something wrong with me. Anyway great story keep it up, I hope to see more chapters soon, Bye. |
Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy On: August 18, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your fanfic, I hope that you will consider making a chapter about Shun and Mu, cause that would be very interesting to see, I gave your style of writing a 9 because chapter one was a bit too short for me, if it had a been a little longer, it would of giving it a 10, but other than that the story was great. Please consider the Shun and Mu thing, if you will. That's all for now, Keep on writing. |
