"'Net Naughtiness" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: 1-3 Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 18:23 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this was a great read, i love the idea of goku and vegeta chattin' online too each other and then have a different life when they're off ~ and i also like when vegeta is 'trying' to not act like his arogant (sp?) self and try to be more... umm.. open and nice, haha, i thinks it's kinda kawaii, lol ~ anywayz, i hope your still updating this, i really want to know how it goes down when goku and vegeta meet ^-^
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Title: LadyKATT Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 22:33 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi I realy like where this is going I see ot has bin awhile since you up-dated but maybe you could get it upi soon Like yoo know how Bejita handles Goku when they meet Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: VegetaDaimoh On: September 30, 2004 13:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i like this, i'm looking forward to more. i'm anticipating the meeting b/w goku and vegeta.
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Reviewed By: DJ On: October 01, 2003 17:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: YOUR ARE SOME WRONG BITCH ASS MOTHERFUCKERS
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Reviewed By: DJ On: October 01, 2003 15:49 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: YOUR ARE SOME WRONG BITCH ASS MOTHERFUCKERS
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Reviewed By: pimpsta On: August 23, 2003 01:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: where's the rest, it's getting good |
Reviewed By: rebel On: July 26, 2003 17:22 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey this fic is great its real funny! I wish you would write more |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 02:17 CDT Comment/Review: *snicker* I'm waiting...
One issue I noticed - if Ve- uh, Bejita does not know anything about chat programs, how does he know how to do the /me action that describes what you're doing? Little logic slip there...
Lookin forward ta more. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 19:25 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: now that is funny nd I like tit keep up the great work. |