Reviewed By: SOD On: June 24, 2003 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent, the story is progressing quite well, keep it up. I'll do my best to look at it often, but i don't know. Any way, check the grammer more often, its not bad grammar, its that you repeat your self in a sentance fragment inside a complete sentance. The rest is like totally awsome. |
