| "Yami's Fetish" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: yamis fetish
Reviewed By: lilnaomi On: September 18, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plllllllllllleeeeeaaaaaasse oh please write a second part another chapter whatever it wwwwaaasss so gooooood pppllleeeaaassse write more yami n yugi goodness |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
okay update |
Reviewed By: Lil thunder strom On: June 21, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really lke this fic it was good please countinue it .very well written please add a new chap. |
Reviewed By: Maryna On: June 21, 2003 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story but i don't get why Yugi fainted Is it to much stress or a flashback, but most people don't faint during flashbacks.But great story please contitue. : ) |
Reviewed By: Chibi_Oni On: June 20, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good story, but 'Said Yuugi' over and over annoyed me... I'm sorry I just had to say that... But still a very decent fic.. Great job, can't wait to read more of your works.. |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey--
that was so kawaii! i thought it was fantastic. loved yugi's dream. i hope yugi runs into yami in the hallway and a lemon, perhaps, will follow. i can smell the lemony freshness in the air already. *takes a deep sniff*
it was great, but i think that there may be a formatting problem....it was kind of hard to follow. but everything else was wonderful!
(can i review two more times so you'll have four? nah...i'm sure you'll have more than that without me reviewing multiple times.....^__~)
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Zoids Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delightfully written. I await the next chappie eagerly.
But I think there's something wrong with the formatting, besides that, truly great.
Your truly,
Zoids Angel |
