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Reviewed By: Guns On: July 12, 2003 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! SO WHAT PEOPLE!!! THE GAMMER AND SPELLING THAT REALLY MATTERS. AS LONG AS YOU UNDERSTOOD THE LINES THEN IT IS GREAT!!!
well anyway really great fan fic and i agree with dark templar for not having a s/k or n/k, just icause you get the urge :P Please keep writing and don't worry about the spelling and grammer... i like it it, show you have lots of ideals that you need down and type fast |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm not a complainer about Spelling and grammar, so I won't say anything. Please finish the fan fic. It's really good! |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good premise. You need to to work on the technical side of things. Spell check, get a good beta reader. Learn the rules of grammar (they ARE your friend). You have talent. Keep working at your weak points and one day you will be a truly great author and I will be saying "I used to read her work when she started in fanfic . . ." |
Reviewed By: Julie K On: June 29, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like a pretty good story. Unfortunatly I only got through 2 chapters. The spelling detracts too much from the story. You should really get someone to check it for you. Other than that, it shows a lot of potential. I like all the inner dialogue that you gave Kagome. Keep trying. |
Reviewed By: Gundamwinggirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fic very much.And I don't mind the grammar and spelling like some people.But I hope you continue on with the fic! |
Reviewed By: HappyPhantom On: June 26, 2003 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy your story, but I had hoped that Inuyasha would've had more of his ususal traits. You know, being a jerk sometimes. Also, you really need to proofread your stories. Spell check and Grammar check would be great. But all in all I think you wrote a very nice story. Keep practicing, I think you've got talent! |
Reviewed By: Chochi On: June 26, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I loved it! It was so exciting....and exactly what people look for in a good fanfic! |
Reviewed By: Ghetto Angel On: June 25, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I could enoy a fic done by a person who can't spell simple words! I'm sure the story was nice, but I can't enjoy a story with so many errors. So I'm sorry, but I'm giving you a very low rating. Sorry. Better luck next time. |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: June 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story pretty good I really hope that you up-date it soon!!!
lol,Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: chris On: June 24, 2003 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story chapter was very hot nice creativity |
Reviewed By: Brittanica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st off-Don't listen to that 'celestial' bitch-she just wants to get her hands on the fic first.
2nd matter-If you want me to, I can make a website for this fanfic, but not unless you ask me to. I offer this to only the best fics of InuYasha.
3rd up-Good lemon scenes. I like originality/creativity. The short chapters rule, so you don't have to read on forever, just to get through one chapter. I also thank you for writing skinny. This means that the way you write, I don't have to keep scrolling from side to side. THANX!!!
REQUEST-Post next chapter! PLEASE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: celestial_x@hotmail.com On: June 22, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really need to ditch the whole one-paragraph format. also, some proofreading is in order (did you just never spell check at all?). if you want, i'll proofread the whole thing and send it back to you. |
Reviewed By: demon child On: June 22, 2003 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great,great,great,great,great,realy good, update soon, please |
Reviewed By: little anime girl On: June 22, 2003 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
chpater 3 was sad..but still, the fic so far was great, so please, update soon
little anime girl |
Reviewed By: dark templar On: June 30, 2003 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
s/k SUCKS ALOT don't put that in |
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