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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story started out pretty good but it had a bad ending. You left to many unanswered questions. You really didn't end the story at all. If I were you I would edit it and finish it. Also you forgot the basics, spelling and grammer. |
Reviewed By: unknown On: July 23, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHO GIVES A FUCK ABOUT THE SPEELING AND GRAMMER AT LEAST YOU UNDERSTAND IT AND WHY THE FUCK DID YOU LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT DID SHE TELL INUYASHA, DID INUYASHA LEAVE HER, FINISH THE STORY |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!?!?!?!? YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING AT THE END OF A STORY! DOES SHE TELL INUYASHA?! IF HE DOESN'T WILL SESSHOMARU TAKE HER IN?! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! |
Reviewed By: Guns On: July 12, 2003 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! SO WHAT PEOPLE!!! THE GAMMER AND SPELLING THAT REALLY MATTERS. AS LONG AS YOU UNDERSTOOD THE LINES THEN IT IS GREAT!!!
well anyway really great fan fic and i agree with dark templar for not having a s/k or n/k, just icause you get the urge :P Please keep writing and don't worry about the spelling and grammer... i like it it, show you have lots of ideals that you need down and type fast |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I'm not a complainer about Spelling and grammar, so I won't say anything. Please finish the fan fic. It's really good! |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good premise. You need to to work on the technical side of things. Spell check, get a good beta reader. Learn the rules of grammar (they ARE your friend). You have talent. Keep working at your weak points and one day you will be a truly great author and I will be saying "I used to read her work when she started in fanfic . . ." |
Reviewed By: Julie K On: June 29, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
This seems like a pretty good story. Unfortunatly I only got through 2 chapters. The spelling detracts too much from the story. You should really get someone to check it for you. Other than that, it shows a lot of potential. I like all the inner dialogue that you gave Kagome. Keep trying. |
Reviewed By: Gundamwinggirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your fic very much.And I don't mind the grammar and spelling like some people.But I hope you continue on with the fic! |
Reviewed By: HappyPhantom On: June 26, 2003 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did enjoy your story, but I had hoped that Inuyasha would've had more of his ususal traits. You know, being a jerk sometimes. Also, you really need to proofread your stories. Spell check and Grammar check would be great. But all in all I think you wrote a very nice story. Keep practicing, I think you've got talent! |
Reviewed By: Chochi On: June 26, 2003 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I loved it! It was so exciting....and exactly what people look for in a good fanfic! |
Reviewed By: Ghetto Angel On: June 25, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I could enoy a fic done by a person who can't spell simple words! I'm sure the story was nice, but I can't enjoy a story with so many errors. So I'm sorry, but I'm giving you a very low rating. Sorry. Better luck next time. |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: June 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story pretty good I really hope that you up-date it soon!!!
lol,Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: chris On: June 24, 2003 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story chapter was very hot nice creativity |
Reviewed By: Brittanica [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st off-Don't listen to that 'celestial' bitch-she just wants to get her hands on the fic first.
2nd matter-If you want me to, I can make a website for this fanfic, but not unless you ask me to. I offer this to only the best fics of InuYasha.
3rd up-Good lemon scenes. I like originality/creativity. The short chapters rule, so you don't have to read on forever, just to get through one chapter. I also thank you for writing skinny. This means that the way you write, I don't have to keep scrolling from side to side. THANX!!!
REQUEST-Post next chapter! PLEASE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: celestial_x@hotmail.com On: June 22, 2003 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really need to ditch the whole one-paragraph format. also, some proofreading is in order (did you just never spell check at all?). if you want, i'll proofread the whole thing and send it back to you. |
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