| "Daughters of Egypt" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Bekkablair On: November 11, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!! Please please please please please please please please please!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Bekkablair On: November 11, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, where, pray tell, are all the "quotation marks" for when people are kind of, you know, talking? It makes things a bit confusing. To say the least...Gomen if I hurt your feelings...But I like it so far anyway! ^____^
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Title: nirk
Reviewed By: nirk On: October 13, 2003 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
nirk
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Reviewed By: celia - chan On: October 12, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!! i love this!!!!! XO cliff hanger, nyahhhh!!!! but please continue!!!!!! ^________^
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Title: Goddess Shinigamis to coolertehnyoo426
Reviewed By: Goddess Shinigamis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
We have no idea what you just said
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Reviewed By: Us [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dear Secert well that ain't our doing that is MM.org for some reason it does that to our fics we can't figure out why.
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Reviewed By: coolertehnyoo426 On: October 08, 2003 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
d00d y00 4r3 g00d 4t th15 5tuff!!11!
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Reviewed By: secret someone On: October 08, 2003 01:54 CDT
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Dont put spaces in the middle of words and add the quotations when someone is talking.
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Reviewed By: Light Of The World On: July 31, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very unique one of the best fan fictions ive ever read |
Reviewed By: Siura On: July 26, 2003 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That waz a great fic! plz write more chapters soon! and when i say soon i want it nooooooooooowwwwwww! plz & thx! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is an awesome idea...you're very creative! But if I may...may I offer a few tips?
When you write dialouge, try to put the words of the speaker in quotations. For instance:
Look at that! said Lily.
Should be turned into:
"Look at that!" said Lily.
And it always helps to fabricate on details. The more, the merrier!
otherwise, I cannot find anything else to gripe about--it's just a little bit of a confusing read without the quotations. You're very talented, keep it up! Good luck! |
Reviewed By: Lady Nightshade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where have all the quotes gone? |
