| "A Losing Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: July 11, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!~!!~!~!~ thank u for updating! and i would once again like to mention that this story is just amazing. Hopefully, Hiei won't die...or shimo...hahaha. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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That can't be the end...Toguro the younger (I presume) and Yusuke are on their way! Also, I got a slight impression that Kurama and Yusuke were a couple and I'm interested to see if that is so or I was just reading way too much into their conversations. One slight problem I had is that when the POV changed, I couldn't always tell who the new POV belonged to, particularly in the tournament when all the canon characters were together. I'm not suggesting you put in lame "(Kuwabara's POV)" comments but may be some less subtle hints in the first paragraph of the new POV.
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Title: this is NICE!!
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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we arent that big of fans of het, but this was well written!! you need to write more soon because we like it ok? OK.
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: April 13, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there an 11 for the overall rating?
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! An update ^_~ Did good on it too. This is a rather bizarre AU, but at the same time, I like it. Glad you made it back to this one!!
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha On: January 19, 2004 13:42 CST
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Wahoo! You updated! This was a great chapter. Just out of curiosity, is Yusuke and Youko Kurama goin' to be in this again later on? Anyway, glad to see that you updated. Keep up the great work and update soon! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: animelove(not logged) On: January 19, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the chapter! I'm so glad you updated! I'm lazy in my fic too, so no big deal. Update!
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Reviewed By: Phoxy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ficcy!!! that is all there is too it...GREAT FICCY!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH...MY...GOD!!!! I AM IN COMPLETE LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!! WRITE MORE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!! POOR HIEI... by the way, it seems like that you made this story completely on your own! all those unigue names, tribes, houses...it's insane!(in a good way!) love it! keep writing. also, i think that FF.net sucks too. No NC-17? HELL NO!
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Reviewed By: Black Demon On: October 20, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good.I'll say some more things, but first, I wanna do this one thing. {Repeatedly kicks hotsause in the shin} SHE'S pathetic? At least she can spell sauce, ya moron! Ah, I feel better ^^. ... Or is it he? I dunno... Umm, anyway, I think it's awesome that you can create such... Come on, I need a word... Indepth! Yes, indepth characters and alternate storyline. I like how you introduced Yusuke and the others. Let me think... Excellent storylin and characters... Said that already... Oh, and I like your writing style, how it changes POV all the time... I think that's all... Well, I can't wait 'till the next chapter. Bye bye. PS: I take it it's a comfy chair, neh? Lol.
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Reviewed By: HIEIhotsause On: October 15, 2003 21:39 CDT
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HEY! I KNOW YOU! aren't you the person from fanfiction.net who typed this exact same story on there?! SHEESH! GAWD! YOU ARE PATHETIC!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow........i so enjoyed this story! please continue!! will kurama come back?!?!?! he and hiei are my favorite charactors!
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Reviewed By: Kohaku Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Al, I'm with ya 100%. ff.net must DIE!
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 22:14 CDT
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Hey, great chapter. Glad u updated, and keep up the great work! Update soon! Ja ne
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Title: great update
Reviewed By: Youkai of the koku ryuu ha On: September 24, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great update to the story!!! U don't babble that much and when u do it ussually fun 2 read!! Can't wait 4 the next update but remember pace your self ;-)!
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