| "A Losing Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! I loved it! I have become obsessed with many stories and that is just one. I understand about the wait thing but I still can't wait for the next chapter! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 04:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just found this one tonight ... well, last night now ... and couldn't stop reading it. I didn't find it confusing in the least and enjoyed the read. Added it to my favorites to be able to find it easily too ^_~ Um, don't suppose you have an update incoming soon? ^_^ maybe? |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is confusing at first before I figure out who's talking. I have trouble figuring out who's POV it is every scene change until a few paragraphs in through the process of elimination.
The spelling and grammer is pretty good, I don't see alot of bad grammer or spelling.
The originality is very original, but... yeah.
I'm not a huge fan of Hiei/OC but the fact that I sat down and read all the way through should say that it's enjoyable enough for me to continue reading right?
Overall, I think this is a very well written fiction. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: July 24, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! You're such a great writer. I write stories too. Or at least I try. But they never come out as great as your's do.
P.S: Plz update! |
Reviewed By: Fox_Mistress On: July 23, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool! I don't think I could of thought up anything that cool. I like it. Keep writing, I wanna know what happens!!! |
Reviewed By: Urameshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is one of the best stories i've ever read. it is amazing how you created your own characters and alternate storyline. |
Reviewed By: demon On: July 23, 2003 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story i think it was the best ive seen!!! the creator couldn't of done it better! keep up the great work!:-) |
Reviewed By: Kaisei41 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this is a terrific work of writing. A very original idea also. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hiei is one of my favorite characters from Yuyu and I love how this story follows him the way the TV version follows Yuusuke.
I also admire the details and background story you put in this. So many details, its a nice thought that some people on the Floating Island wanted to spare Hiei's life.
I hope Hiei gets to meet his Ottosan. That would be one hell of a reunion. It would have been even funnier if Hiei had met him or another background character at the tournament as a competitor.
Well, great works and I hope you update soon.
Happy B-day. ^_^
~ Kai |
Reviewed By: TwilightStar On: July 16, 2003 15:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i know this has nothig to do with this fan fic but oh well and its kinda late but i just finished reading the 10th chapter.....HAPPY BITHDAY AIASTAIR!!!! ^-^Twilight |
Reviewed By: Kiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, I like it alot |
Reviewed By: TwilightStar On: June 30, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfic!!! personaly i couldnt have done better so write more!(and i dont want Genki to die eather)
TwilightStar |
Reviewed By: ReikaiTantei0201 On: June 28, 2003 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I agree with you. Don't kill Genkai, and keep up with all the great work!
Sincerely,
ReikaiTantei0201 |
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 01:30 CDT
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this is great i dont think i could have written it better myself this is very creative keep it up and please please write more soon |
Reviewed By: ReikaiTantei0201 On: June 22, 2003 09:26 CDT
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Great fic! Keep up the good work, and please write some more!
Sincerely,
ReikaiTantei0201 |
Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is one of most creative ideas I have ever seen. You must continue. |
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