| "A Losing Battle" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! An update ^_~ Did good on it too. This is a rather bizarre AU, but at the same time, I like it. Glad you made it back to this one!!
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha On: January 19, 2004 13:42 CST
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Wahoo! You updated! This was a great chapter. Just out of curiosity, is Yusuke and Youko Kurama goin' to be in this again later on? Anyway, glad to see that you updated. Keep up the great work and update soon! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: animelove(not logged) On: January 19, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the chapter! I'm so glad you updated! I'm lazy in my fic too, so no big deal. Update!
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Reviewed By: Phoxy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ficcy!!! that is all there is too it...GREAT FICCY!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH...MY...GOD!!!! I AM IN COMPLETE LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!! WRITE MORE I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!! POOR HIEI... by the way, it seems like that you made this story completely on your own! all those unigue names, tribes, houses...it's insane!(in a good way!) love it! keep writing. also, i think that FF.net sucks too. No NC-17? HELL NO!
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Reviewed By: Black Demon On: October 20, 2003 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good.I'll say some more things, but first, I wanna do this one thing. {Repeatedly kicks hotsause in the shin} SHE'S pathetic? At least she can spell sauce, ya moron! Ah, I feel better ^^. ... Or is it he? I dunno... Umm, anyway, I think it's awesome that you can create such... Come on, I need a word... Indepth! Yes, indepth characters and alternate storyline. I like how you introduced Yusuke and the others. Let me think... Excellent storylin and characters... Said that already... Oh, and I like your writing style, how it changes POV all the time... I think that's all... Well, I can't wait 'till the next chapter. Bye bye. PS: I take it it's a comfy chair, neh? Lol.
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Reviewed By: HIEIhotsause On: October 15, 2003 21:39 CDT
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HEY! I KNOW YOU! aren't you the person from fanfiction.net who typed this exact same story on there?! SHEESH! GAWD! YOU ARE PATHETIC!
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Reviewed By: Egyptian_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow........i so enjoyed this story! please continue!! will kurama come back?!?!?! he and hiei are my favorite charactors!
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Reviewed By: Kohaku Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Al, I'm with ya 100%. ff.net must DIE!
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Reviewed By: En Satsu Koku Ryuu Ha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 22:14 CDT
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Hey, great chapter. Glad u updated, and keep up the great work! Update soon! Ja ne
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Title: great update
Reviewed By: Youkai of the koku ryuu ha On: September 24, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great update to the story!!! U don't babble that much and when u do it ussually fun 2 read!! Can't wait 4 the next update but remember pace your self ;-)!
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating! I loved it! I have become obsessed with many stories and that is just one. I understand about the wait thing but I still can't wait for the next chapter! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 04:46 CDT
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Just found this one tonight ... well, last night now ... and couldn't stop reading it. I didn't find it confusing in the least and enjoyed the read. Added it to my favorites to be able to find it easily too ^_~ Um, don't suppose you have an update incoming soon? ^_^ maybe? |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is confusing at first before I figure out who's talking. I have trouble figuring out who's POV it is every scene change until a few paragraphs in through the process of elimination.
The spelling and grammer is pretty good, I don't see alot of bad grammer or spelling.
The originality is very original, but... yeah.
I'm not a huge fan of Hiei/OC but the fact that I sat down and read all the way through should say that it's enjoyable enough for me to continue reading right?
Overall, I think this is a very well written fiction. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: July 24, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! You're such a great writer. I write stories too. Or at least I try. But they never come out as great as your's do.
P.S: Plz update! |
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