Reviewed By: kokonutsu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story you have here, i'm guessing the parents are Inu Yasha and Kagome right? Hmm i'd feel stupid if it wasn't. Your grammer was good, and i hadn't managed to find any spelling mistakes either, you are a good writer, so continue. |
