| "The Beginning Of Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 05:09 CDT
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I really liked this! Trust me, it was close to love. :P ... You should write some more chapters, it would make it a lot better. I really really liked it. 'You don't wrote this as a Lemon huh? Too bad, it would have fittet in perfecly. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: bimbo n ditz On: February 23, 2004 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is well cool gud work! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was interesting for a one shot. You would probably be really good at doing an in depth v/b get together. |
