| "Hiei One Half" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: June 30, 2005 17:37 CDT
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i loved it!!! i cried when hieis babys died and all the other sad parts!!! hiei didnt even get to visit the old lady again!!! what are the experiments for anyways?? die stupid mirodi dude!!! and is that hanazukee dude hieis dad?? i liked the bond yukina and shiroi and genkai and hiei had when he was pregnant and lost the babies! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 15:29 CST
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hey when are you going to update this story? I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: SeaMyth(nli) On: December 09, 2004 01:25 CST
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NOOOO PLEASE WRITE MORE!! This is incredibly good!
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 19:07 CST
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The title of this review is so you know that as of yet I haven't decided to continue with the reading so if I say something that you already know please don't be annoyed. The Principle that you are refering to I think is named Mr. Takanaka, but I'm not entierly sure. As for the story itself the whole thing about Hiei turning into a girl was totally predictable, but has potental. I liked the idea with the water, very original. Also, Hiei and Yukina getting stuck in school, I have a feeling that we are in for a load of laughs with this one. Overall, I would have to say that this story has a lot of potental.
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Reviewed By: mz.bitz. On: March 05, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O WOW. hiei is hurttt. dont end it here. update VERY soon please please please. i know that's the childish approach, but yeah. ARGGG. kurama doesn teven know how much pain he cuased hiei, hiei has to survive!!! i love agnst. =] you should post this on adultfanfiction.net too.
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Reviewed By: hiei is mine forever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, if you ask me. Hiei should be a girl. Lol! This is so funny. But make Kurama get more revenge on Hiei. It would be so funny! I got an idea. In a chapter, how about Kurama finally shows Hiei's true gender in Home Economics. Hiei is so embarresed, he runs away. Kurama starts feeling bad about what he did and yeah. You think up the rest. Update soon PLZ!! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: true_frienz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha, it the fic is nice.. gd job, could u update soon. i am looking forward fro the next chpt.thanxs |
Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 20:49 CDT
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Ohhh, I finally found your story again... and with an update ^_^ It's just too cute to not keep track of!
More would be a good thing ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Trina On: June 28, 2003 03:56 CDT
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I hope that Hiei and Kurama get back together I really like that couple. I'm a old fan of Ranma1/2 so I get two good showes even if I don't see Ranma much any more. the last time I read a fic like this I got super angry cuz Hiei wasn't together with Kurama. So far I like this fic U did a good job. Update soon |
Reviewed By: Ranma's Lover On: June 21, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good work. Your writing is okay. Please, write more. Ranma forever |
