| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: LadyinBlack On: August 01, 2004 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start. It pulls the reader in. Can't wait to see what else you write!!!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: BlaqueDragons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! So you decided to put the story on mediaminer eh? YAY! Sry to find out that you are putting it on hiatus though...anywhos, plz post up the chapters again!
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Reviewed By: SAJ On: June 26, 2003 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have made an excellent start to your fan fiction. It's exciting and intense and I'm already looking forward to reading an actual chapter. Plus, you had Rishid in it! He's my favorite character, and I have a bit of a crush on him actually, so it pleased me very much that you included him, however short a role he played. Anyhoos, great job, and update soon! |
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's ok but keep going it'll turn out alrigth...
^.^; |
Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo, it's very intersting. I can't wait for you to write more. |
Reviewed By: Mel On: June 22, 2003 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not a bad start very good. |
