| "Yami's Fetish" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Maryna On: June 23, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really bad place to put a cliffy, I hate when that happens on TV. I will continue reading this so continue writing this story.*puppy face* : ) |
Reviewed By: nonya On: June 23, 2003 18:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
*saids with chibi eyes* while you're so cruel to leave it off right there. If I don't see an update soon I'll be a very angry *anime waterfall tears* peweeees. I'll be good and review. |
Reviewed By: anon nymous On: June 23, 2003 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue or me and some very unhappy reviewers will be.......very unhappy.*grumbles of agreement in back ground* |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
loved it! can't believe you cut it off there....*grumbles in frustration* oh well. i liked how you made them get right to the point!
keep up the great work and update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
loved it! can't believe you cut it off there....*grumbles in frustration* oh well. i liked how you made them get right to the point!
keep up the great work and update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Scalett Ding On: June 22, 2003 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story! Please continue on!
To be honest I hate cliffhangers, but at least I know I'll be coming back for more. So please keep going!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryou_Yoru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow-ness! I likies this story! Very original idea! You did a great job, cept...please dont wite the word 'cum' or 'cock', it well... kinda makes the story seem gross and unappealing...like its not meaningful lovemaking and rather just plain sex. But i liked it anyway! *blows horn and trumpet in a march to ur writing* Yay!! Keep up the good work!
Ryou~ |
