| "Shinji and Rei: Illicit Liaisons" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: Chap 5
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron(lazy) On: October 17, 2003 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woahthats all i have to say
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Title: Ahhh Misato
Reviewed By: Tiek Mo Shet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well not the first story or chapter where Misato and Shinji get it on but deffinately the best. One of the things I like best about all WW stories is that all the characters act like themselves, he sees no reason to give the characters a personality transplant to get them horizontal and superimposed. I think that both Rei and Misato are pretty much in character here though Shinji might have a bit more of a backbone then normal. Of course it's hard to write Shinji as he exactly is, in the series he's probably the biggest pussy in the world. The lemony scenes are well done and avoid most of the lemon cliches. However I would say that all the alternate names for body parts can get a little distracting given how well written the story is. As always excellent work and now I have dreams of a Misato/Rei/Shinji threeway dancing in my head. Come to think of it I don't think anyones done that to my knowledge. hinthint
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 19:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is goood it seems to have something of a story to it so its not just a lemon for the sake of being a lemon (which by the way is not nessarly a bad thing its just better with a story)
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: October 11, 2003 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it seems Shinji is reeeeealy getting it from both ends so to speak. I wish he had given Rei as much as she had him, but I'm sure that will "Come" in time. ;-) Nice chapter though Rei needs more attantion in the next one. dennisud
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Reviewed By: Showstopper (can't be bothered to sign in) On: October 01, 2003 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to read this thing and you did your usual outstanding job. Whenever you get to the final act between Shinji and Rei, it's going to be hot as hell. As for this particular chapter, you made my day with Shinji finally getting with Misato. You even put in a touching moment with the scar bit. I wasn't quite feeling the fisting part at first because that's not really my thing, but I figured I'd give it a shot and to my amazement I found that I enjoyed it a lot. Also, I'm pretty sure that fisting hasn't been used much if ever in Evagelion lemons. Keep up the originality, good work and have a good day, :) Looking forward to the next chapter to this and Payback.
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Reviewed By: 12315315 On: September 28, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u rock dude 100%
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Reviewed By: neo vash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its perfect |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont usually rate a fic using five tens but...
This fic is Awfully great, excellent job, just hope asuka doesn't appear in it...too much |
Title: Mmmmmm Shinji and Rei, with a dash of Misato
Reviewed By: Procyon (Too lazy to sign in) On: September 14, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Delicious, your writing style is beautiful, your discriptions are livid, and life like. Your originality was excellent.Spelling and grammer is good, could do with some corrections once in a while. I enjoyed this very much. Post more soon! |
Title: chap 4
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron(to lazy to sign in) On: September 11, 2003 06:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Racy
nuff said |
Reviewed By: KamuiSHirou On: September 08, 2003 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God... this was SO HOT!!!! I liked chapter 4 the best. Every must learn to crawl before they walk, and what better way to crawl than with a real, live, full-grown woman? My husband will thank you tomorrow, lol. I must go attack him now.
Fantastic job, and I hope you add more soon! |
Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: September 07, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you just about hit every young boys dream of being taught how to do it and how to do it right!
I was aprehensive when you mentioned Shnji and Misato but damn if you did't pull it off well here. Not only did they preseve their love and elationship (Well up to a point), they did everything but the final act here. You sir are what a great lemon story writer should strive for having a great storyline and feelings to go with the lovemaking (Notice I didn't say sex) that seems to prevade your stories.
This is a story written with feeling not just a bang fest. So please continue all of the stories and keep us happy and feeling good about reading a lemon.
Finally please hurry with the "R" rated story you were talking about as I think the rest of the non-lemon world should see your skills in writing a passsionate dramatic Eva, Tenchi or Ranma story.
with warm regards, dennisud |
Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 09:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
So hawt. I came. And again. |
Reviewed By: NPH On: September 07, 2003 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BEST. LEMON. EEEEEVVVVVAAARRRR. |
Title: chap 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron(to lazy to sign in) On: September 06, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow !
thats all i have too say |
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