| "Shinji and Rei: Illicit Liaisons" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there you should continue this im getting tired of waiting IS GREAT!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: wxnut On: August 12, 2003 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style: Good Narrative
Spelling & Grammar: I noticed no mistakes.
Creativity: Lemons aren't new, but this is different enough from the other Rei/Shinji pairings to give it that rating.
Enjoyment Factor: I read it all and I want to read more.
Overall: Pretty good. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: August 07, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came. |
Reviewed By: Lemon Rider On: August 05, 2003 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Rei/Shinji lemons if no the best , Keep up the good stuff!! |
Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How will I be able to stop my love for you when you write such hawt things ? :o |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far sooooooo Good! Danm you are writing this while for all intesnts and purposes the two are IC of course without inhibitions. I do like this story but I hope you ern;t going to include misato, it would just spoil thier innocence in the fact that this is theirescape from their frightening and lonely lives. Maybe If Kaji would satisfy the comely major while voyagering on the young couple. Then that would work well.
But it's your story so I'm just going to check every few days for an update. nicely done so far.
dennisud |
Reviewed By: Homicidal Scarecrow (formerly Wiggedywigwig) On: August 07, 2003 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another chapter, another heap of unconstructive, badly spelt praise from yours truly, sick of it yet?
Of course not :)
Congrats on the new chapter, this is just getting better and better. One thing I am not so sure about though is the inclusion of Misato into the scenario. So far you have done the supposedly impossible task of creating a lemon (and a hot one at that) while keeping everybody IC and the situation "real". It would be a damn shame to throw that all out just to add another character for the sake of it.
Payback was good but it (no offense meant) became a non-sensical cluster-fuck by the fourth chapter, it would be a shame to see this go down the same path.
Feel free to ignore this review, it's kinda stupid anyway.
The artist formerly known as Wiggedywigwig |
Reviewed By: Carlos Negrão On: July 30, 2003 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you'll write chapters as short as this one, you'll really need to update more often. |
Reviewed By: Wynk On: July 29, 2003 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very funny. Its a nice, simple way to begin a EVA hentai. I like the combination of lust, awkwardness, guilt, and a hefty dose of embarrassment. Gives me flashbacks of Kimberly's So Happy Together story. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Sickfuck On: July 29, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, that Seahorse dude, psaiyan, you're all god. Please write more of these fucking shits. And, you should try to make it more controversial, like how Rei is shinji's sister and all. Ya know, make it a family matter. |
Reviewed By: omega_fox_194 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fanfic i loved it,and i agree with goki u should make a three some one next |
Reviewed By: Wiggedwigwig On: July 30, 2003 03:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
As you know I enjoyed the first installment immensely and am glad you've decided not only to continue with this lemon but also to give it an extra dimension by adding some story. I look forward to seeing where Shinji will go from this embarrasing (to say the least) situation.
In other (less gramatically questionable) words, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gj with this fic S/R ROCK ehehehe |
Reviewed By: goki On: June 25, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was HAWT! That was a nice lemon...^_^
Ps: You know what would make it better? By turning it into a Rei/Shinji/Asuka THREESOME! The R/S/A threesome is somewhat of a rare commodity nowadays. No one has done it in ages!! It would be great if you could add Asuka into the mix. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your such a tease. Now get back to writing Payback ^_^ |
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