| "Shinji and Rei: Illicit Liaisons" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: EVA-09
Reviewed By: EVA-09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 04:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely great and i hope you will finish it so update please.
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Reviewed By: Spike of Doom On: June 11, 2005 09:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool this fic is good but not as good as Payback :)
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow man, never cease to impress. Keep it up, you're among my favorite authors for sure now! Love the story, the style, everything. YOu take this story and make more than just a pwp...theres actual plot( somewhat =P)! Anyways, keep it up man, and update soon!
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Title: C'mon...
Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: February 16, 2005 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi! Lord Warp! Please, please, PLEASE update! C'mon...
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Title: Possible Small Mistake
Reviewed By: Person 111 On: February 11, 2005 13:09 CST
Comment/Review:
"the full length of his immature six inches" "Considerably later…" (how much later is this?) "his 9 inches"
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Reviewed By: Andrew J. Talon On: February 07, 2005 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I promise, if you finish this lemon I will give you a full, absolutely truthful review on what I thought of it. In other words: Finish this magnificent piece of erotic literature so we can continue to worship the feet you walk with! ... Ack. Oops... Anyway...
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Reviewed By: JockoMegane On: October 15, 2004 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the first two chapters. I have to say "Stolen Undies" was definitely--even by itself--one of the best EVA lemon's I've seen so far. I mean, hell yeah. :)
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Reviewed By: LainEverliving [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 14:50 CDT
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An excellent fic all around. I'm sorry to say that I haven't reviewed the individual chapters up until this point, but the whole of this story is more than worthy of praise. The style of your writing helps move your lemons out of the normal realm of sex, sex, more sex (not that there's anything wrong with that...) and onto the level of trully good writing. You've managed to excellently characterise everyone, and keep them that way throughout. Very good work, and I am looking forward to the end already!
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Reviewed By: Optimus_Magnus2 On: February 26, 2004 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No man ever has a day THAT good in his lifetime
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Reviewed By: a random reader On: February 24, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are definitely one of the best lemon authors I've seen. Chapter 1 of Payback and chapter 4 of IL are among my favourites. So please don't take what's next the wrong way. In opposition with Payback, which is very graphic, I can't help but think some things are missing from IL. Like some people said, Rei didn't receive as much as she gave in chapter 5. Rei is an interesting character because she knows nothing of emotions, and it's fun to have her discover them. As such, you shouldn't have skipped her first 'receiving' experience between chapters 5 and 6. Another thing that disturbs me a little, Evangelion has 6 female characters (7 if you count Mana from 'Girlfriend of Steel'), but some of them, namely Maya and Hikari, hardly ever get any. Could you dish out a few good lemons involving them someday? It might be a nice change. (No I'm not asking an orgy with Shinji and all the girls, have mercy on the 'poor' guy)
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this new chapter indeed! The Omakes were class Hehe misato as a darth erntai master.......hehe Does that make Shinji the More powerful ark Side Master? Keep it up SM
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: February 22, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you got the good Doctor involved here and yet this is still a Shinji/Rei (And a bit of Misato) story. Wonder if the Rad Demoness will be somehow involved! Ya know just to shoot an idea out there Wht not a new story with Shinji's main squeeze being ... Hikari! ;-) dennisud
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...really wish i could write lemons like u. Keep updating
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Title: Chap 5
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron(lazy) On: October 17, 2003 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woahthats all i have to say
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Title: Ahhh Misato
Reviewed By: Tiek Mo Shet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well not the first story or chapter where Misato and Shinji get it on but deffinately the best. One of the things I like best about all WW stories is that all the characters act like themselves, he sees no reason to give the characters a personality transplant to get them horizontal and superimposed. I think that both Rei and Misato are pretty much in character here though Shinji might have a bit more of a backbone then normal. Of course it's hard to write Shinji as he exactly is, in the series he's probably the biggest pussy in the world. The lemony scenes are well done and avoid most of the lemon cliches. However I would say that all the alternate names for body parts can get a little distracting given how well written the story is. As always excellent work and now I have dreams of a Misato/Rei/Shinji threeway dancing in my head. Come to think of it I don't think anyones done that to my knowledge. hinthint
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