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| "Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: shourin On: May 14, 2004 02:36 CDT
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where are the others?? huuuhuuuuhuuuu... *crying* ,more.. more.. more!! ken..is so stupid.. schuldig!! help him!!
| Reviewed By: shourin On: May 09, 2004 23:05 CDT
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how can i ever miss this fic!! your fic is great.. and poor ken!! maybe i'm too obsessed with the ken aya pairing so i've missed this great fic!! silly me!! so continue.. this is soooooo cool.. more!! more !! more!! and faster too!! i'll continue writing reviews for you again!!
| Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 17:58 CDT
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I know that I'm reading this a little later that your other reviewers but I'm really enjoying this story. I love Schuldig, he's such a sexy bitch! I hope that you continue on with this story soon. Ja!
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 11:26 CST
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Okay, not that I'm shocked that Youji won't be able to get it up when Ken comes over...I mean, the boy almost pukes when he has to kiss Ken, and that isn't the formula for a match made in heaven, ne? yum, gorgeous impassive German...*huggles Schu-chan* I got the note that you had updated on Christmas Day so this was a lovely Christmas present... I really like the scene with Schu and Ken at the beginning...good nurse Schu taking care of his poor sick KenKen... And about Youji's problem...I guess it's going to play a serious role...Anorexia is hard enough to get over with help, let alone without, and someone who has self esteem issues like Youji would have even more problems...because even though he seems to believe he's gorgeous, the way he got that way has obviously played a role on his personality... Anyway, great writing as the usual goes...longer chapters!!!!! But at any rate, Merry Christmas! Hope you get presents and such with bishies included!
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 11:33 CST
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As always, beautiful chapters...and beautiful, beautiful Schu... *huggles the evil Yotan* I feel bad for him, bt he is such an ass in this story. I can see how Schu would brush him off the way he did... *raises an eyebrow at Ran* He should watch where those knees go...or almost go... and then Ran/Ken thing *shakes head* glad you didn't go there...I love Ran/Omi so very much... Sorry, I know absolutely no German, except what I pick up from Rammstein songs... Can't wait for the conclusion...*huggles everyone, including Farf* Write more, and as soon as you can...
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 12:56 CST
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Once again, with the naked Schu!1 Wee-ness! And the thought of Schu and Ran together...*purrs* I like that Ran knows what's going on, but will Ken believe him is he tries to tellh im. I think he might believe Omi, but then again, he might think that Ran put him up to it. Funny how everyone but Ken can see the truth, but I think that's mostly because Ken doesn't want to lose what he thinks he has. Schu and Youji in bed together? *double purrs* I think I need tobe alone now..But Ken and Youji in bed together too? Gah, the boy works fast! My prediction for the end is that Youji will end up sad because his beloved Axl will not have him. I don't think Ken and Schu will end up together, but I think that's better for Schu at this point...Is Nagi with anyone? maybe Schu could end up with him? *suggestion!!* I dunno...Schu just shouldn't end up alone, but I think he deserves more than Ken at this point...
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 23:26 CDT
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Again with the awfully mean Youji...poor Schu is going to be crushed...Ken will remain an idiot forever, and Youji will remain evil..poor sad and alone Schu...He needs to meet a nice boy who is much more deserving than the awfully dumb KenKen...Even if Youji wasn't there I still don't think Schu would end up with his beloved KenKen...that boy is just too stupid for his own good...I really wish he would be smarter...is he ever going to figure out what the Hell Youji is doing? It's not like it's very difficult to ignore repulsion...even the biggest of idiots could see what was going on...Won't Schu eventually realize his beloved KenKen is being played? Though if he told Ken, I'm sure the idiot would simply say that hentai Schu is just being jealous...dumb and stupid Ken..can't get over that, as you can tell..Kepp writing please? I adore this story so much, and I really never want it to end...I just want it to end so I know the ending...make it all better? Please?
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 12:01 CDT
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You're warning for an evil cliffhanger? The whole story is an evil cliffhanger, because we're still no closer in knowing what's going to happen in it all. Farfie almost told Ken what's been going on and the baka still didn't get it?! *falls over* geez, naked Schu....ye Gods, that was a wonderful image...I would look and stare, and then ask Youji to top that...*double drools* and Ken wouldn't be so bad either...Good thing he has something going for him. It's definately not his deductive skills. Are we any closer to the end of this lovely fic? Cause, I could go on reading it forever, I'm just worried about poor Schu...I don't think I'm so worried about KenKen anymore...the rejection and hurt willprobably bounce off his thick skull anyway...*grrs* Ken! *slap* open! *slap* your! *slap* big beautiful brown eyes *slap slap slap SLAP* *laughs as Schu goes off to kiss KenKen's bruises* I love them so much...*drools again over naked Schu* woo, more soon, please!!! Hurry, Hurry!!!!
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 15:41 CDT
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All I can say really is woo...*blushes at the thought of Schu naked...* *drools* aw, sweetness. And in my mind with this extra ficcie thing, Ken would develop a love for SchuSchu...I would hvae liked a scene with Youji all fuming because his plans didn't work out...*smacks KenKen* Schu is waaay hotter...what the hell are you doing, baka yaoru? *thwacks Ken more* *locks Schu and Ken in a room* *ties Youji up* There, everyone's happy! Oh, wait! *gives tied up Yotan as a present to play with* Aww, Farfie's so cute when he has a new chew toy...Anyway, can't wait for new chappie...It's going really well, except for the poor hurt Schu, stupid KenKen, and evil Yotan...I love Farfie...he's absolutely precious...Thank you for the side ficcie, it was mucho enjoyable!! Hurry, write more soon!!
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 21:17 CDT
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I'm probably killing you with my reviews, but what can I say; I really like your style! Poor Schu keeps feeling worse and worse, and Ken is just blind and/or totally retarded. Youji is such an ass, and why can't Ken see that? Becuase Youji has a nice ass, that's why!! Poor sunburnt Ran and genki bouncy Omi-kun...what a pair those two make, ne? Farfie can play soccer?! *blinks* I'm scared...muchly... Okay so, here's me hoping that Kenken will come to his senses before it's too late and he loses the best thing for him...and then Schuldich can be all happy, and life will be grand! :) Big smiles! Keep going...on anything...I'll read it all!!
| Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, another wait that was worth it...So, is Youji really gay and he actually likes someone, or is he just playing (I know he's playing with Schu and Ken, but if he was gay, there must be some level of seriousness about Schu...because god, he's hot...) poor Schu-Schu. *thwacks Youji repeatedly* I hope Ken is eventually smart enough to see through that stupid facade he's putting up. And it's hard to believe that Schu hasn't given up yet, but I guess that shows how much he really loves Ken...And one would guess he knows where Ken aquired that little love bite? Farfie on the soccer team...with people?! *runs* oh yeah, but he has some level of sanity here, doesn't he? Does playing soccer make god cry? What if he beats something pretty? Oh anyway, fix Schu...I can't stand to see him so alone here...and make Ken wake up and smell the German coffee ;) Update soon! | Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 10:59 CDT
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Oi! So pretty angst!! Poor little Schu *huggles plushie* Evil Youji, making KenKen leave poor Schu all alone! Hai, side story! Side story would be lovely, and might manage to console poor Schu! *glares at Youji more* Update soon please! | Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 07:57 CDT
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that was really good! Poor Schu getting all happy and Ken being snatched away by Youji. Can't wait to see what the gorgeous one has in store for Ken. Part of me feels he deserves it, and the other part wants for Youji to leave him alone and let him make with the Schu thing...:0 You're a good write, update soon! | Reviewed By: g2 On: July 03, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. it doesnt suck you just need to updte faster please..i hate waitting! | Reviewed By: Tuaro On: June 27, 2003 13:44 CDT
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Sounds like Yohji is going to try to do unto Ken what Ken has done unto him. No? | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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