| "Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read other fanfics and this one is enjoyable. Cant wait till its finished! I suggest less of the surch of the potion maker and moor outakes with the 2 little cute ones.
~Kitty~ |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I'm finished, but you HAVE to write more its sooooo cute, Hiei kissed Kurama ^-^. plz plz write more soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your english is no problem. From what I've read is pretty good, and you shouldn't tell yourself other wise. I love this fic so far(i'm not finished):P Aww it sound sooo cute, Hiei and Kurama little kids.XD N E wayz its really good ^-^ |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fanfic! Keep writing! =3 |
Reviewed By: the_friendly_void On: August 01, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that if you look at the ratings, they look phony because their all tens, but I loved your fic so much I can't remember running across any mistakes. Please keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Hiei's #1 girl On: August 01, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'v read this story over 5 times.So PLESE PUT UP A NEW STORY PLESE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 30, 2003 15:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i forgot to add you should have Hiei get sick becouse of the sweet snow! |
Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 30, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awsome story!!!!!!!!please write more!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ice Dragon On: July 27, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely written! i love your story! its so funny when kurama put Keiko's bra on his fox ears! lol and it was surprising that Hiei kissed Kurama on the cheek. its sweet and all but are you a yaoi writer? just wondering, keep on writing! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! I JUST FINISHED ALL YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVE THE PLOT SO FAR AND I'M SURE YOU HAVE GREAT I DEAS FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! I JUST FINISHED ALL YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! I LOVE THE PLOT SO FAR AND I'M SURE YOU HAVE GREAT I DEAS FOR WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI aka Otaku Hoshi On: July 25, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO GOOD AGAIN!!! I LOVE IT!!! Especially when Hiei kisses Kurama ^_^ That is my favorite part so far. I really like it, you are such a tallented writer! But, I have a quick question for you: Where do you live and how old are you? I don't know why, I just want to know.. Anyway, I love all of your stories. ALL OF THEM!!! I am on vacation right now, so I cannot update my fanfiction to often. What is going to happen when Hiei and Kurama turn back to normal? I cannot wait to see! I would really love it if they were a couple in the end ^_^ heehee But, I understand perfectly if you do not want those two together in your story. I just really like them together, but I am just one person! Bye-Chu for now, update soon!
***********Otaku~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: Hiei's Girl On: July 24, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far one of the cutest fanfics that I've ever read. I love the baby versions of Hiei and Kurama. |
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