| "Sleep First, Punishment Later" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
You got a funny one. I enjoyed reading every word of it.
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Title: ryuu-nin
Reviewed By: trey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!
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Reviewed By: Wake me Up On: April 20, 2005 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! But i was hoping that you would put up all those other stories you had on ff.net a couple of years ago. I never got to read them, I've only heard about how great they are. i desperately want to read them, especially since you are such a great author. Can you post all your other stories here? Please? you would make my day. I heard you took them down after NC-17 wasn't allowed there. I never got to read any of them because I didn't know ff.net existed! So not fair! So please put your stories back up!
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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read your entire series on ff.net too. you have to write more to Vagabond! this is interesting, I love the clip you have of the next one! lol...
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Reviewed By: Blackhawk On: February 26, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If your writing it, WHY THE HELL ISNT IT UP YET! If you like Inuyasha than head to my story. (OH LEMONS ARE SO GOOD) Its called the right way, my name is Sandro666 im just lazy so i didn't sign in. email me when you have the next chapter up. sandyblackhawk@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 20:41 CST
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KOOLIES!!!!! lol Im laughing sooooo hard right now!! I can wait till that sequel!
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Title: Stuff
Reviewed By: Yorokonde On: September 28, 2003 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Probably the funniest lemon I have ever read! You have a very good style of writing and should be proud of that. Although you have a few typos, everyone does, so actually that doesn't really matter. The next chapter sounds hilarious! Keep up the good work and ganbare!
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Reviewed By: C.G [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, it's been awhile since I have read your fics. I'm glad that your posting on Media Miner now, and I hope to see more of your stories soon. This includes a certain one that has a little baby named Felix in it ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mini mI On: July 07, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. trhe description was amusing. so you've taken a thing that we all think about, and made it so damn funny and err sexually provoctaive at the same time. But is that evil feather making a comeback? |
Reviewed By: Mini mI On: July 07, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. trhe description was amusing. so you've taken a thing that we all think about, and made it so damn funny and err sexually provoctaive at the same time. But is that evil feather making a comeback? |
Reviewed By: thepiccolopixie loves the smut! On: June 27, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:::fans herself::: Whoosh! Hotter than a night spent in Hell!
I don't know why I never clicked on that link before....
My curiosity finally got the better of me and I clicked on the mediaminer.org link in your FFN profile. I was pleasantly surprised to find a SECOND chapter to "Sleep First, Punishment Later!" Of course, I'm spreading the word. But, WOW, was that ever dirty! I didn't think those two had it in them... geez. XD
So, yeah, I'm *very* interested in that little sequel you said you were working on. Keep me posted!
Your biggest fan,
--tpp |
Reviewed By: Sailor P On: June 23, 2003 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you posted this fic here! Zelda and Link married! AWW! Sweetness! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Infiniti On: August 14, 2003 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 words Best Fic Ever i loved it finally they got together yay ok now for the sequil im thinking lots of lemon and lemonade hehehe |
