"Jaganshi ga Boku no Nagaisu ni Iru!" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:43 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Just read this fic for the second time. It's a very enjoyable story but leaves me with all sorts of questions; did Tsukimi's Ma make oatmeal raisin cookies because they were "healthy" like mine did? Will Tsukimi and Hiei lose the apartment at the end of the week becaus Hiei has no gainful employment and Tsukimi only works a couple hours a week or will they sell off Hiei's tears (being from a guy they should be extra rare!)? Is Hiei's implanted Jagan an inheritable characteristic (seeing as he's not human) that will be passed down to their kids leading to the kids having extra strength jagans which they use to "earn" all "A"'s? When will Hiei beat the further crap out of Masshiro?
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 17:23 CDT Comment/Review: PP: *drools* Wow. One of the best Hiei/OC Lemons I've ever read! You have an amazing ability!! YYP: Aren't I the one reveiwing lemons? PP: This one deserved my attention you baka Yami!! *smashes YPP over the head* Hiei: This is what I live with -_- Kami help me... PP: *glomps Hiei* You're cute!! Hiei: @_@
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Title: none Reviewed By: guerro15 On: February 20, 2004 18:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: update it please
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 18:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have read and re-read this fic for months and I absolutely love it but I never wrote a review. I would really like it if you made a continuation or an epilogue of some sort. PLEASE!!!!! Thanks in advance.
Eirwen Lai |
Reviewed By: little miss crazy On: August 08, 2003 15:56 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow dat was great! u hafta continue! iz soo good! well ill be waitin for tha next chapters! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Youkai of the koku ryuu ha On: July 30, 2003 12:18 CDT Comment/Review: In my other post i forgot the "ha" on my name please ignore that! |
Reviewed By: Youkai of the koku ryuu On: July 30, 2003 12:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great!!! I especially love the plot twists like when its told that the main character is a jaganshi that was good!! Were you talking about me or another dragon with a slightly more english name? N e way great fic and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: lahelahe On: July 19, 2003 19:11 CDT Comment/Review: I find your writing refreshing and direct. So when will you continue the story. I am sure that you have lots of ideas to mess with their minds. |
Reviewed By: bakurasbitch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:00 CDT Comment/Review: Hey! I know you from Fan Fiction.net! Anyway,I really liked the story.I've read it everytime I go one the site.I like lemony stuff, espically NC-17! My parents don't like me reading about it though,seeing how I'm olny 13.Ooops! Wasn't supposed to say that. |
Reviewed By: Bejipan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 21:04 CDT Comment/Review: Isn't this story already on mm.org? I remeber reading it.
Bejipan |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 03:03 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow update already! Oh and you got a ten for the lemon LOL! I'm such a little perv! |
Reviewed By: XxPlutoxX [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 18:19 CDT Comment/Review: LOL! This was very entertaining! I hope you update soon, I really want to know what happens next.
~Elvia |