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| "To Live Is To Die" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: hmph On: June 25, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... that was quite stupid, yet, I read it, how kewl is that?... lol sorry
Shouldn't have made Trunks as a girl, and... Gohan couldn't reach SSJ3 at 11, I know it's nice but theres a fine line between common sense and stupidity
It wasen't that bad of story I guess, just i dunno, make the fighting more in depth, like the tourney thing. The peeps who were attacking Gohan, what caused his power to drop out so low? you know | Reviewed By: Guruhoro [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 02:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I've never watched Dragonball, that's why I can't say anything about the originality/creativity. Some of the grammatical errors and such bugged me a bit, and the longer transportations in time could've at least included approximately what happened during that tim (e.g. for the following X months Gohan was depressed, not training as much as he used to, because his friends were dead (okay that example sucked)). I guess I couldn't enjoy this fic mostly because I've never seen the series, so blame the rating on me, not the author.
I only reviewed this because I like to review something from all those who review my "NERV Cosmetics", so everybody come and read my stuff, 'kay? |
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