| "Omi's Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Chris B On: September 02, 2004 14:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loev the story please write more and you will review more. I can't wait till next chapter!!!! YohjiBabe2008
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Reviewed By: Mikomikomi On: October 07, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. I like it (even though Schu/Omi and or Nagi seems to make me go squick) BTW, Farfarello's power is that he's a manipulator. The kind of person who can do anything they can put their minds to (ie. not feeling pain and sticking little needles in your body so and hanging from them, and in some extreme cases, levitation and 'flight'.)
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Reviewed By: PyroBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sweatdrop* Okay, just a little critique...try putting more descriptiom into it, also work on paragraph structure...*bows and walks off* |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: July 16, 2003 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy..feed me Semore! |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: July 13, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, great chaper I love Nagi and Omi, ^_^. Anyway I have no problem with pairings, and as for the updates do whatever you want it doesn't really matter to me. If I had to choose I would say I prefer the more regular updates even if they are short. ^_~ Update again soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ebony Wings On: July 07, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo please update more. I really like this story> Please.... |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: June 28, 2003 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY another chapter, ^_^ I know how it feels, school for me is starting again soon. YUCK. ^_~ Oh well. Keep updating, can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: MK On: June 26, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe i always love omi fics. esepcialy when he has powers^^ please get the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: June 26, 2003 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, WOW Omi was so deep. ^_~ Anyway loved it, can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Kearoru On: June 26, 2003 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, I also like how you're portraying Omi. Please keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: June 24, 2003 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I like your fic a lot. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more. ^_^ |
