| "Water park" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Neko_Fangirl On: February 13, 2005 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this outta be good! I can hardly wait until they gotta try on the suits-confusion and embarrassment unable to miss. and then the water park will prolly be really fun and funny too. so to sum it all up..great story..update soon please.
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Reviewed By: RIIIGHT On: June 28, 2004 13:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
OK...you need to do some major editing. then i might be able to look at this some more. i know you might not give a damn wether or not i come back, but at least make it easier for people to read! Its cute though...^^
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPdate!! or i'll go crazy!!!Update pleaseeeeesssss!please *big puppy eyes* please!
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Reviewed By: K005 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 07:49 CST
Comment/Review:
pls update i need to know what happens pls go to bottom to read my other review
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Title: cant live
Reviewed By: K005 On: November 28, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WILL DIE IF U DINT UPDATE IM DIEING DIEING DIEING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH::TAKES A BREATH::AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: Jvirgo90 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's was ok but u need 2 write more. ok keep writing. and check out my fic it's called A SLIENT TEAR please read and review for me. if u want you can help me write a lemon if your up to it. ok E-mail me a Jvirgo90@aol.com JA NE |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ummmm, I think that you need to make the chaps a tad bit longer. But if you do that this should be a really interesting story. Pease update soon and also remember to make the chaps a little bit longer. |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ummmm, I think that you need to make the chaps a tad bit longer. But if you do that this should be a really interesting story. Pease update soon and also remember to make the chaps a little bit longer. |
Reviewed By: sango100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story please keep writing more and more! I luv this fic! |
Reviewed By: Nadark On: June 24, 2003 11:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Plz Write More |
