| "Wishes Made and Dreams Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did you abandon this story , I am beyond curious to know how it would end , I enjoyed the first story and even though I just found them last night I do like them and am wondering will you ever pick this one back up
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Title: Review for Wishes Made and Dreams Come True
Reviewed By: The Eternal Hyper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm assuming you aren't going to keep going with this story... I'm dissapointed! I really want to know what'll happen. Did you just have major writer's block for a while, then forget?! I (and lots of other people, too, apparently) want you to continue with this story!!!
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you please update soon you have a very good story and alot of pepole would like to raed the edn so please finish the story
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Title: Update Soon Please!!!!
Reviewed By: Shohikira On: April 11, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update this fic soon! I read it almost a year ago and it hasn't been updated since.You don't know how many people you are letting down right now. But I love this sory and theo ther one,too!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: llxsunsetxll [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
u really need to update this story! it is really good! i love the first one i was shocked with the ending! update real soon
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: kagome675 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 10:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story! But...........you need to finish it
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: June 24, 2004 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how come u've stopped updating? i was really getting into that story and all your other stories i was just wondering if u'd be nice enough to continue this story for me... and anyone else who loves it just as much as me(that goes for all your unfinished stories)
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Reviewed By: koiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I Loved the first one, now i want to know what will happen. PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 11:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Think that Sesshomaru should admit he loves Kagome.
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Reviewed By: j3ndls [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 06:38 CST
Comment/Review:
omg what a great beginning to the sequel plz keep writing1 -jen
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Reviewed By: kogathewolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 01:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooo good. but when r u going to add to the story.
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Title: when r u going to update?!!
Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 02:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how come you haven't updated, it's been months since the second chapter was put out. you could at least put up an author's note explaining why your stopped!! so update as soon as you can...even if its just telling us why you stopped, k. bye. ^-^ W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: DeathDagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But what did the letter say?
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so good i read the first one to and the ending was so good but it was so sad art the same time, ya now. please update soon....
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Reviewed By: Starry Dragon Knights [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 06:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story!! It was very interesting!! Can't wait till' the next ch. comes out!! Ja!! Ne!! A Fan and Author, Starry Dragon Knights
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Title: sorry i forgot to rate
Reviewed By: inuyasha Fan 15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say agian Please Write more |
Title: Write more pleaseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inuyasha Fan 15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 06:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please please please please write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: HELLO On: August 21, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HOPE THAT U DID;T FOGET THIS FIC SO PLEASE UPSATE SOON SO WE(UR FANS) KNOW THAT UR ALIVE^_^ UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, nice start! I like the way you're bringing Sango into this, with her memories and dislike/hate for Sesshoumaru. With Kagome's confused feelings, this will make things more difficult should she wish to talk about them with Sango. And Sesshoumaru's feelings, now, don't seem so strange...after all, he's been stuck to a tree for two years. That would make anyone think over the wrong things they have done in their life and regret them. I'm not sure how you intended the first story, but I always felt that he actually did love her...but let his greed for the sword get in his way...and that he possibly never fully realized his feelings, despite what he said to her. So, with that thought, it would seem as if he's had to watch the ones he loves (despite what he said) grow and live on while he can do nothing. |
Reviewed By: brittany On: July 20, 2003 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story was great. i can't wait for you to have another chapter out. it was kind of sad when sessy said he still loved her. and her not being there to hear it and all. |
Reviewed By: LemonySweet13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, First of all, I loved the first version, up until the part, well... Anyway, i was pissed and decided i wasn't going to read the sequel, but either I have a weak resolve or this story is just 2 d*mn good!
Holla, LemonySweet |
Reviewed By: JustMe On: July 17, 2003 22:48 CDT
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love the story...let them get back together ... maybe let him earn Sango's forgiveness by bringing somebody else back from the dead or maybe Sango herself in order to attone for what he did ... perhaps his actions with Kohaku and at the end of "Perfect Birthday Present" can be explained away via "possession ... by Naraku's various spirits" they will have to find a way to get rid of the invading spirits without hurting Sesshoumaru ... could be a challenge for Miroku. |
Reviewed By: TrAcEy On: July 02, 2003 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10 i luv this story ppplz hurrz & update asap k well anywayz g2g xoxo
TrAcEy |
Reviewed By: HellzAznGrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...that was realli kawaii please update it soon! o yeah....sry..if i gave you some bad ratings but i was just putting in some random numbers so sry!!! |
Reviewed By: Kouga-sanLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Don't stop writing. You are really good at it. I have never read a story like yours. It is really refreshing to read something new. I really enjoyed the prologue.I can't wait for the next chapter!'The Perfect Birthday Present' was excellent! Thanx for writing a sequel. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Inu-Libby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me Likes a lot. I read your last one and didn't partcularly like the end. I'm glad you're writing a sequal. |
Reviewed By: Eqlipse_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pweaz! Pweaz!
Let them get back together!
Of course not without giving him a hard time.
But let her at least give that handsome hunk Sesshoumaru another go!
Hey! It's only fair after how she had kept going back to Inuyasha repeatedly! |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! I LOVE THE STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Brittanica On: June 24, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh,My God! That was SO good! I read 'The Perfect Birthday Present' followed by this, & they ROCK!!! Update soon, please! ^_^! |
