| "Once a Demon, Always a Hunger" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Demon Cat On: July 14, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok...for starters you need to make paragraphs....it gets really hard to read and it's easy to loose your space that's why i gave you a nine instead of a ten..well anyway....i liked it...keep writing...can't wait to see what she does to get her shard back....e-mail me if ya wanna or when ya post your next chapter...at lita_sailorjupiter_14@yahoo.com ...
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Reviewed By: Neko Youkai On: July 15, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For starters....you should make seperate paragraphs because it is a lot easier to read...but other than that....i liked your story...please continue....feel free to email me when your next chapter is up...thanks..... lita_sailorjupiter_14@yahoo.com |
