Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 16, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tuh...Works for me! I have never played FFVIII, only FFVII which I loved. I only started reading FFVIII fanfiction yesterday and this is only about my eighth. I've tried to find out the main storyline and as much information as I can about the character in FFVIII but noone seems to want to reveal spoilers. (Let me get this straight, Laguna is Squall's father, and Ellone is Squall's sister, yet Laguna is only Ellone's uncle? *Confucsion*) Anyways, point being, this fanfiction was great. Youd have a great writing style and your use of grammar was excellent. However I cannot comment on, what seems to be, your main concern because I do not know the character that well. Infact I had to read up more on Laguna before I began reading this fiction. But from what I do know, you portrayed them very well. Great Job! |
