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| "A Fragile Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: the Lonely Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 01:40 CST
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I read your story, and I absolutely love it! But...YOU KILLED OFF KOUGA-KUN!!! HOW COULD YOU?!?...... Ahem. Sorry about that. Anyways, I love your idea. And I really love the pairing. It's so hard to find Sess/Kag pairings around here! Also, I'm usually iffy about Inu/Sang pairngs. But I actually like it here! I'll get to reading the rest of the story now! Oh. And one more thing. I'm part Native American myself, and a dreamcatcher isn't a true dreamcatcher if anything is in the center. I'm not exactly sure why. But I've been told, by my mother, that it's a fake dreamcatcher if anything, like a jewel or bead, lies in the center of it. Just wanted to let you know. ~the Lonely Hanyou~ "Nothing's impossible." Whoever said that never tried slamming a swinging door. --Unknown
| Title: Keep it coming!!plz
Reviewed By: IcyKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this i cant get enugh of this story!! i read the first 2 and now this one!!!1 omg keep it coming plz plz!!! well i hope to have my own up soon, tho no shure when, well keep it coming *~*Icy*~*
| Reviewed By: TaiyoukaiAyumuoftheWesternLands [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic, and really wish you would update. Maybe this is some bad karma coming back to bite me...I should probably finish mine too...Oh, well! Update soon please!
| Title: You've come a long way
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: January 17, 2004 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hmm I read everything, from the one shot-er, thru Brothers, and now this. I never read the one shot, I never even knew there was one, but I did read the second part of this arc. However I don't recall reading the epilogue of that. I like it. I thought it was a nice way to end the sad story. (You never wrote that she got her soul back though, not precisely.) The epilogue, did they do it? And Kagome's a middle schooler? O.O I hope that her school goes up to ninth grade. **I think the third part is really good. Having read everything from the beginning of this arc, I think I can say that you've improved and grown as an author. I think Sesshou became rather ooc in the latter part of the one shot. Here, he's perfect and so is everyone else. Things are going slow. I think the fact that you're incorporating actual life experiences also gives it that touch. He grows attached to a girl who had a very unfortunate lot in life, and it touches me that he wants to adopt her, even though I know that is what happens in the anime. Keep on writing. Do you have a list where you can email those enlisted when you update? If you do, please put Sesshyangel@aol on it. PS: A little more Sess/Kag action in there, if you would please. It seems to me that they have a rather small part overall, seeing as how you're incorporating so many other characters and pairings.
| Reviewed By: ficfan On: December 31, 2003 12:23 CST
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hi i just read the whole thing, and the last update was in october. so whats the deal? did you forget about it or something? its almost 2004 I'd really like to read more. so try to keep updating, unless you havent been writing because of some life-threatening thing, if thats the case ignore this.but I'D REALLY LIKE TO READ MORE!!!
| Reviewed By: lil'sesshi On: October 26, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnooooo...Miroku cannt have canceer thats to sad please dont have him make it a happy ending. But still i did enjoy it please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Ejineko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh....sesshie....oh, yeah, the reveiw. Loved it, update!!!! Later on during the week, if ya get a chance, try to see if i figured out how to post my fic, Control, yet. it'll be good, i swear! *gets out fire-proof suit* Sesshies's a little OOC, doncha think? But it's so cuuuttteee!!!!!! *drool drool* so, get ready for the Eji insaneness to begin! Bwahahahahahahaha! i'm so happy, happy, la la la.... sorry, i'm on a serious sugar high. Limp Bizkit RULZ! will you please kill kikyo again in your fic? make rabid hamsters take her virginity and she kills herself or something. Thanx! Eji out!
| Title: Hello!!!
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Sess/Kag!!! This is a really great story!! I hope that you continue!!!!Keep up the good work i cant wait to read more!!! Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: hanna On: October 01, 2003 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is I LUV IT write more pls! i can't wait another two months.....
| Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 05, 2003 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so interesting so far. at first i thought it was like a regular fic not dealing with the shikon or anything of the feudal japan. then it takes an unexpected turn. dealing with the shikon and kagome not remembering. i'm just so curious to find out what happened. and what's going to happen. | Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: June 27, 2003 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good!
I love the idea. This time its IY who makes the sacrifice. That ought to make things all the more interesting.
Update soon and often please. It's summer and I'll be here for all of it except for about a week.
oh and Sess?kag right?
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