| "Answered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mikyo-chan On: July 10, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more.....onegai....i can't wait....this story is sooo cute....
=^'.'^= |
Reviewed By: neoqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I love your storie, just like a little not, today it is july 9, and the last time you update was on June 26, come on man, don't keep me waiting like that. |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
You reviewers ROCK!
I to the person that said my life can wait...guess what I HAVE NO LIFE! Currently I'm devotion the majority of my time to writing QUALITY anime fan fiction.
Your lemon is coming...HEH!...just have a little more patience for an author eh?
JA! |
Reviewed By: Anime-Angel On: July 07, 2003 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow that was great!! Please update soon... thank you |
Reviewed By: dude On: July 01, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait either for the lemon |
Reviewed By: Julie K. On: June 29, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! This is a very sweet fic. I hope you up date soon. I can't wait for the lemon. |
Reviewed By: Nimbus-Chan On: June 28, 2003 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh PLEASE update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!
That is all.
~Nimbus |
Reviewed By: NN On: June 27, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK please write more please ! |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!!!!!!
How often does a mom help a guy out to make her un-wed daughter in "the mood" to have sex? still, that is quite different the whole on-one-knee-proposal-to-screw thing.
More!!!!!!!!!! your life can wait, type, dammit!!! |
Reviewed By: pops On: June 27, 2003 05:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep writing please |
Reviewed By: speelin On: June 27, 2003 05:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write more chapters |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARG! Damn, no hentai yet. But you do have a very good set up. Can't wait for part three.
The suggestion I have is to double check your grammar and spelling. MOst of the mistakes in that area are easily overlooked. |
Reviewed By: MALA On: June 27, 2003 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: zeek On: June 26, 2003 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic please update soon and make it as good as you can lemon.
don't for get to do the one on fanfiction.net sometime's I can't get on here, but good luck and hurry |
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